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~ Review 87 - Twist In Destiny by @yourFEATHERS ~

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by TEEN_FIX

by TEEN_FIX

Book Information
Title: Twist in Destiny
Author: yourFEATHERS
Genre: Historical Fiction, Romance, BL
Chapters: Prologue + 7
Target Audience:

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

The two main characters of this story are not simple characters. They come from two different caste systems which ordinarily should be a barrier between them. But they bonded over a shared interest and before long a strong friendship was formed.

Writing Style:

The story is written from a third person point of view. There are a lot of descriptions and narration to give the reader a full capture of the setting of the story.

There is a focus shift but it all depends on whose emotions are required.

Spellings and Vocabulary:

Spelling and grammar are well done with no errors. The sentences are compound to complex. The paragraphs could use a bit more spacing especially in the aspect of dialogue.

E. V. A. L. U. A .T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

The prologue did a very good job of showing the intensity that the book was going to provide in the future.

I absolutely love the way the author is building the love story between the two male leads. It is slow and steady even before the insertion of the female dynamic. As expected, one realizes his feelings before the other. This is getting interesting.

I still don't have a clear understanding of much that is going on just yet especially in regards to the visions. Is it the past, future or another life? Hopefully, the author will try to clarify it more in the coming chapters.

Recommendation:

I would advise adding the pronunciation of the names for readers that aren't familiar with the language.