𝐅𝐢𝐱𝐞𝐫 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬 : 𝐏𝐨𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐩𝐞𝐧𝐬, 𝐄𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫𝐬
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A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S
Characters:
Shravni is a princess whose kingdom had fallen to ruin and forced her to be sent as a bride to the opposing kingdom.
She has seen the best and worst of people, experienced war, pain and loss. She is ready to sacrifice herself for her people.
Devrit is a man of principle and honor. He doesn't break his promises and treats everyone as they should.
Writing Style:
The writing style is in third person pov which allows for in-depth explanation and construction of the settings. It isn't a hundred percent one-sided given that we do have the main character of each episode.
Spellings and Vocabulary:
The spelling and vocabulary have little to no errors.
The paragraphs for narration are too bulky and can be broken down more.
Punctuation is well done.
E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N
Overall Impression:
The story begins with a good analogy of the events that lived up to the present day. We are introduced to the two main characters from the start and are given a glimpse into their personality and reaction to situations.
I like the addition of a close handmaiden, Madhavi. She serves as a reminder of the FML's home and also a friend/sister figure that she can rely on in a strange country.
I also like that the first love of the prince was quickly settled in the beginning. All those lingering affairs will just worsen and complicate things further.
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