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~ Review 66 - Blind Love by LetjungCookIan ~

Blind Love by @LetjungCookIan
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Reviewed by katrina12234

Title: 10/10

Cover: 9.5/10
I feel like maybe the cover could be a tiny bit better rather than just having Jungkook on the cover. Maybe a cover focusing more on the plot than the character.

Blurb:
The blurb is wonderfully written. It awakens a curiosity within the reader to read the book. It is short, concise and has quite an impact on the reader.

Writing Style:
The story is mainly written in first person with only the second chapter seeming to be third person. I would suggest adding a header or a disclaimer of it being third pov, as it switches suddenly from a first person pov.

Flow and Pace:
The flow and pace is wonderful, well balanced. It's a slow burn romance with a good pace.

Character:
The characters are well portrayed. Each chapter reveals something new.

Plot:
The plot is really good and interesting. I genuinely was interested with the plot twist you introduced. Well done 💯

Grammar:
The grammar was very well. I couldn't find any mistakes.

Overall:
The only thing I would suggest is in the first few chapters where she is portraying to be blind, maybe just rewrite those scenes since the way they are written are like she can see them with her own eyes instead of feeling or assuming. (Not sure if it was intentional. If it was, feel free to ignore this.)

Secondly, I would suggest that the flashback scenes you had in the first and second chapters can be in italics to differentiate them from the present.

Overall, I enjoyed the story. It's an ongoing book with a lot of potential. Just do make sure to keep the character growth slow and realistic.

Thanks and I do hope you take the feedback positively and not negatively. The book was really good, but as a reviewer, I was paying extra attention to details to help improve.