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《Kailyn》The Fall of Dralia

The Fall of Dralia by officiallydelicia

Cover: 10/10

I love the cover. The font is beautiful and readable. The image fits the story well and the color scheme is wonderful.

Title: 10/10

I like the title a lot. It sounds like something I would pick up out of a bookstore. It's simple enough to make it easy to remember. It also leaves room to draw conclusions and become curious.

Blurb: 9/10

The blurb is done well. It introduces the main character and plot. It gained my interest quickly. The change of pace was also nice. I thought it was unique.

Characters: 8/10

So far I find the characters interesting but I feel like there isn't enough to completely know them yet. I like that there's a semi-large cast I find those fun to read. The main character is well thought out and I like that she acts like a real person. For example, her reaction to being told she had powers seemed realistic enough to me. I found her a joy to read and I'm curious to learn more. On to the other characters, I like that you hint at a backstory but don't directly state anything. It makes room for a mystery and has me curious. So far I like them but I just don't feel much for them yet.

Plot: 20/20

The plot is great, it's fast-moving but isn't unreasonably fast. The chapters are a great length as well. I find the plot intruiging I actually read all the chapters you have up and usually I read around five instead. It definitely has my interest and I hope to read more.

Writing Style: 19/20

The writing style is amazing. The descriptions are easy to picture but aren't too drawn out. It's consistent and easy to read. The prologue alone had gotten me interested I find those history ones super interesting I dont know why.

Grammar/spelling/vocabulary: 8/10

There were quite a few errors that I noticed. Mostly in punctuation (ex. using a period instead of a comma in dialogue) some spelling mistakes, spacing errors, and some errors in formatting.

Enjoyment: 10/10

I really enjoyed reading it. I have it in my library and I'm patiently waiting to read more.

Overall: 94/100

Overall, I think you have a wonderful story. I like the characters so far and hope to learn more about them. The plot is intriguing and I love your writing style. The only issues are some of the mistakes I mentioned above but other than that I think you have a great book. Keep up the amazing work!