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《Adriane》Sweet Night

Client: almostgods-

Reviewed by: -forever-summer-

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Cover: 5/10

Your book cover is nice and cute. But then, a book cover must be related to the book. It must depict a nice, intriguing picture for the readers, so they would choose your book among the many other books.

Though your book cover was nice, it didn't fulfil all the requirements as a book cover. It didn't cover the genre and how the story is based off. A more fantasy mystery type of cover would suit your book more.

It will bring out more readers who are interested in reading a fantasy book, and find your book easily. Also try to make it relevant to the title too.

Your book cover is cute and good for a first draft but it will be much better with a better cover. It will bring more readers, the book deserves.

Title: 4/10

The title of your book was more common and didn't match that well till the five chapters I have read. There wasn't anything sweet and nice about the nights mentioned in the book. So the title may be misleading for the readers.

Also, a more unique title would help your book get discovered more. When you search 'Sweet Night' on Wattpad, more than a thousand results land you with the exact same title and few more with the tag. It will be hard to find your book in the sea of books with the same title.

So, I would suggest you look for a more unique and creative title that would suit your book more.

Blurb: 7/10

Your blurb was nice. It was short and explained a bit about the main characters. But then I felt like you could have added a bit more mystery to their character in the way of writing.

When I first read it, I was like, 'it is a fine blurb for a first draft but then after reading your book, it seems not fair for your blurb.

I like the way you have written your book, so it would be so much better if you put in the same effort for the blurb.

Also, don't give out all the information and try to maintain the mystery behind their characters. Explain those in the book and not in the blurb. Blurb should be discrete and not dive deep into the descriptions.

Plot: 9/10

It was different from all the books I have read before in the same genre. It was new and interesting to read.

Creativity: 9/10

The plot was creatively chosen. I liked the introduction of new species because of the selfishness of one person. It was beautifully portrayed.

Writing flow/pace: 8/10

There were a few mistakes which disrupted the reading flow. But other than that it was great. It was well written and perfectly paced. The small mistakes can be rectified by editing it.

Writing Style: 10/10

I liked your writing style. It was unique and well written.

Setting and Character Development: 8/10

Setting could have been explained a bit. It was a bit vague and left a lot of the part for the imagination of the readers. Though it is good to a certain extent but isn't good to effectively understand what is going on.

Since it is just the beginning of the story, I'm not going to comment on the character development but I hope to see great character development of Asme and Micah.

Grammar, Spelling, and punctuation: 8/10

Though there weren't much grammar mistakes, but there was many confusion in the pronouns disrupting the flow of readers. But I hope it will rectified after editing it.

There weren't any spelling mistakes but at some places, punctuation could have been added to make reading it easier and better.

Genre relevance and Enjoyment: 9/10

It was perfectly placed in supernatural genre. As only few chapters were published and it wasn't enough to shoe the romance genre, I don't want to comment on it.

Total: 77/100

I liked your book, it nice till the recent chapter that was published. It could be improved a lot. It can be done while editing after completion of the first draft. All the best! Keep writing!