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《Adriane》James Knight

Reviewer: -forever-summer-

Client: IskippU

Thank you for choosing me as your reviewer. I hope my review helps you to improve and attract more readers to your book.

Cover: 9/10

The cover of your book was beautiful and interesting. It is enough to pique the interest of the readers. I love the fonts you used. It matched perfectly well and was beautiful.

I felt like you could've increased the font size of your subtitle. It was too small and wasn't easily legible. Or you could also use capital letters to bring it out more and make your book cover better. Other than that, it looks great.

Title: 6/10

The title of any book must be unique, interesting, eye catchy and should pique the interest of the readers. Using the same title for all your books isn't going to help with grabbing the attention of the readers. They may visit your profile and be overwhelmed with the same title.

Also, in some devices the name isn't fully visible, so it would be hard for the new readers to search for the first book of the series.

Try using different titles, like "James Knight: The rise of the Superhuman" and a different title one for the next book, would make your book more unique and attractive for readers.

Blurb: 8/10

I love that you chose to go with a short and concise blurb for your book. It was well written and made me wonder about the book when I first read it.

Though it was well written, I felt like you could have arranged it better. Let me give you some pointers:

1.Get straight to the blurb. So, I would suggest you remove the subtitle you added at the top of the blurb. It is repetitive as we've already seen that in the cover and it doesn't seem attractive.

2. Don't remove the features from the top of the blurb. It attracts a few readers. They would love to read a book that has been said as best by the other writers, readers, and other Wattpaders.

3. Explain a bit about what you wrote before writing it. You had mentioned about his emotional battle, but you never mentioned why he is battling. It would be better if you had written a line or two about it.

I also felt like you used a bit more commas at unnecessary places. These are just minor changes that would make your book a better read for the readers, other than that your blurb is great.

Plot: 9/10

I loved the basic plot of your book and it was executed well too. There aren't many people who just directly go to a superhero plot, I haven't read a book before with that plot. It was nice and refreshing.

You also used a shy outcast guy and popular girl trope, though it's kind of overused, it was nice to read it in your book. It had a hint of your touch and it made the overused plot more beautiful.

Though I loved all this, it would have been great to have something that just hooks the reader in. Like a twist or maybe something unexpected in the first few chapters to keep the readers hooked to your book.

Creativity: 8/10

I love your thought process and your creativity with your plot and tropes you have used but then as I said earlier you could add some twists to hook the readers in.

Adding twists and cliffhangers are the important part where the writers can show great creativity and make your book more interesting for the readers. Other than that, it is great.