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《Kailyn》To Know You

To know you by thechristianprincess 

Reviewer: Kailucy 

Cover: 8/10: 

It's not bad but not great. The picture chosen is pretty but some of the words are slightly hard to read.

Title: 9/10

The title is decent. It's short and sweet. It goes with the story.

Blurb: 10/10

The blurb is great. It raises some questions that made me excited to open the book. It introduces the characters and plot. Very well written.

Characters: 9/10

The characters are very interesting. I loved the introduction to Olive in chapter two. It seemed realistic. Also, a smart move to make her the new chef it's a great way to give them time to bond. Seth is an interesting character as well. He seems to be a good person underneath but he's been so cultivated in the bad parts of the world and it's seeping into his attitude. I look forward to seeing how his character will develop. So far my favorite is Nakawa though, she seems so sweet.

Plot: 19/20

So far the plot is still unraveling but it's very obvious that it will progress even more. I like the pace it's not too fast or slow.

Writing style: 19/20

You have a great writing style. Especially when it comes to descriptions. The descriptions were actually so beautiful. The imagery was amazing. You handled the POV switch very well. I like that it was obvious it was changed. Olive's tone read much differently than Seth's. Also loved the spider web metaphor in Olive's section.

Grammar/spelling/vocabulary: 8/10

There were some errors in several chapters. Also, you don't need to specify its present-day in Chapter 1. It's kinda already implied given there's a prologue. :)

Enjoyment: 9/10

I don't usually read this type of book. It just isn't really my type but I actually really enjoyed this one. The plot felt different and I liked reading about the characters.

Overall: 91/100

Overall, you have a good story. The plot is interesting and the characters are well-written. Maybe go back and fix some of the errors when you have time. Other than that amazing job! Keep it up!