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《Kailyn》Agent X

Agent X by ScribbleYourThoughts
Reviewer: Kailyn Kailucy
~Public review

Cover: 9/10

I like the cover. The silhouette is a nice touch in contrast to the color scheme. The fonts look great and are readable. Very nice.

Title: 10/10

The title is great. I find these types of titles intriguing.

Blurb: 9/10

The blurb is well written. It introduces everything it should. The main character, the main plot, and it raises questions. There was a line that didn't read right. Other than that the blurb is perfect.

Characters: 9/10

The characters are fun and interesting. I really enjoyed reading about them. I do think I need to read more of the story for me to develop more thoughts on them, but so far they feel real and well-developed. You can see their personality through their dialogue and actions. Very well done.

Plot: 20/20

The plot is great. It's fast-paced and fun to read. It's super engaging and I honestly didn't want to quit reading.

Writing style: 20/20

You have an engaging writing style. The descriptions were good, but the dialogue was amazing. It felt real and I could imagine the characters saying it. It actually kinda read like a movie which was amazing.

Grammar/spelling/vocabulary: 8/10

I didn't catch very many mistakes but there were many instances where you'd use commas instead of quotations to mark dialogue. In one or two of the chapters, I didn't notice it but in the other ones, It was kinda distracting. Other than that I didn't really notice anything.

Enjoyment: 10/10

I really enjoyed reading this and I will definitely continue to see where it goes.

Overall: 95/100

Overall, you have a wonderful story and I look forward to reading more. You have a great writing style that brings the plot and characters to life. The characters are great and the plot is fast-paced. Just maybe think about fixing the errors I mentioned in the grammar section and it's practically perfect.