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《Kailyn》I'm an Extra in a Tragedy Novel

I'm an Extra in a Tragedy Novel by mikrokosmos96

Reviewer: Kailucy

Cover: 9/10 

The cover is cute. The fonts look great with the picture. The author's name is hard to read but other than that the cover is great.

Title: 8/10  

Honestly, the title seems a bit long in my opinion. Not saying it's bad and it does fit the plot perfectly. It has a decent flow though and it's memorable.

Blurb: 9/10

The blurb is good. It tells a bit about the MC and the plot. It's very interesting and made me eager to start reading. There were some minor errors, like a few missing commas. Other than that your blurb is good.

Characters: 10/10

The characters are super intriguing and a main driving point of keeping my interest. The plot is good but the characters really made it hard for me to put this story down. Duke Constantine is a creep and I groaned when he showed up. Lord Villarreal intruiges me. I really hope he's a good person but I'm kinda feeling he might not be. All the characters brought something to the story and kept me wanting more.

Plot: 20/20

The plot is so engaging. I kinda already knew I'd like it based on the blurb but it was even better than I expected. The opening paragraph was perfect. I loved the fact you explored the realisms of time travel. The PTSD and depression were also a good touch considering it'd be absolutely crazy to return to your life after you were executed. And not even your own life but the life of a character in a book you read.

Writing style: 19/20

The writing style was great. The descriptions were well written and I feel you handled the emotions of the MC very well.

Grammar/spelling/vocabulary: 9/10

I did notice a few errors but there weren't many at all.

Enjoyment: 10/10

I really enjoyed reading this. I definitely plan to continue.

Overall: 94/100

Overall, you have a great story and I'm very curious to find out what else you have planned. Keep up the great work!