tAoJnJ - Draft dialogues

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*Must work on the consistencies
*Stay on the plot
*lots of editing

*Jay's biggest regret and the secret he has been keeping from Jake is, he is his lover in his universe, targeted by his fellow Jays because he was the jay of all jay. They were planning to use his Jake for Jay to breakdown but little did they know he goes ballistic and killed everyone in his universe. Jay may be a scientist, but to bring back someone to life, he's no god. So he hopped in another universe, went back to time and sought to protect the Jake there to ease the pain and guilt. Even if he goes back in time in his own universe, he would be violating time travelling code which will surely make him a target in the agency- it would be troublesome considering they are celestial beings. Which is why he decided to reside in a fresh timeline and fresh universe to cover his tracks.

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"Now ur just being rude"

"Its called telling the truth Jake, i believe im not being a piece of shit"

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"Why did you even chose me as your partner? I don't get it- you said it's because I am smart- but clearly that girl was smarter than me Jay-It doesn't make sense.."

"I don't know where you're going at, Jake, i told you the reason so can you just shut it?"

"I'm not convinced at your reason, Jay- you are hiding something"

"I'm not."

"You are!"

"Jake, do i look like someone who lies?"

"Yes"

"Fair enough"

"So are you gonna answer my question?"

"No"

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"Do I know you?"

"Of course Jake, I'm Park Jay yadda yadda your roommate, what else is there to learn?"

"No.. I mean, how do you know so much about me?"

"I just do, I'm a scientist"

"But that doesn't mean you have to... know everything about me, it's bothering me Jay"

"Jake, can you just shut up and follow my lead?"

"See this is what I'm talking about, why should i follow you blindly?"

"Because...you're an idiot, I'm a genius"

"But I'm smart enough to be your partner? I don't get it Jay, just what makes me enough-"

"You're still on this Jake? Really?"

"Yeah, I am, do you have any idea what it feels like for someone to barge in to your life and bring you to these life threatening adventures like it's a normal thing?"

"There's nothing normal about you to begin with"

"What did you say?"

"You're existence is a paradox, Jake, don't you know that in every universe there should be one that you don't exist? Guess what? You and I exist in all the universe regardless of any situation, we always end up with each other and that's why you're never normal, Shim Jaeyun"

"So? I'm just simply asking you why, and you answer me it's because we're meant for each other?" "Jay, you're fucking crazy, I don't care whether the universe create us for each other, I just wanna know why the fuck do i have to be with you if my life is always messy when you're around"

"that's just the way it is Jake, in every Jay in the galaxy there's a Jake. You and I need to stick together-"

"Because what? Will I die? Will you die?"

"No"

"Then explain it, Jay, tell me the truth"

"I don't need to tell you anything"

"Oh? So, you want me to gamble my life out there just to have some ef-ed up crazy adventure with you? we're not even saving the universe, Jay, we are just messing with everything. You're destroying planets, disassembling their governments, you're ruining everything for everyone"

"You're right, I am"

"Why?"

"I don't need to tell you the reason do I?"

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"Why are you keeping this shit, Jay I just wanna help you"

"You're not helping me Jake, no one can, only I can help myself so fuck-off"

"Then tell me why can't i help you?!"

"You really want me to tell you?"

"Yeah, say it to me."

"Because you're a Jake, a little human being who thinks he's the shit just because he survived a few adventures with Jay. Think carefully Jake, without me you would have been dead from the getgo, I minimized the chances of you dying, so instead of bitching around like this, how about stand back and let the professional do the work?"

"Fuck you, Jay. You're terrible"

"I don't care, now get back and leave this place"

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