FYI #2: Chapter 23 Deleted Scenes

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Who wants more Everdawn content? Yurrr! It's such a waste not to write these bonuses because they're really just deleted scenes that should've been in the chapter!

It is arranged chronologically according to Chapter 23, so I recommend reading it again but with these deleted scenes. Enjoy!

I. Sophia's Seduction Workshop

This should be in the part where Solene was trying so hard to be like Sophia as they head to the mist barrier, serving as a flashback.

“Listen up! We got twenty minutes to prepare.” Sophia clasped her hands, taking their attention. “You’ll now undergo my seduction workshop, you inexperienced, unromantic girls.”

“Why do we need to seduce them again?” Letoile asked. “Can’t we just kill them?”

“First of all, that won't ever help us get inside, and we want to have a safer way to get in without them recognizing us as enemies. Is that right?” She glanced at Solene who nodded.

“For that part, I will use my Lampad Illusion on us so we can appeal more to them, so irresistible that they won't even detect that our mana’s different from the actual Linwen sisters,” Solene said, opening her grimoire.

“And since I'm the most fashionable one out of the bunch, I’ll make our clothes very enchanting!” Sophia added. Together, they combined their spells to create gowns for themselves.

Also, note that Solene’s Ambrym Lava Dress is actually based on her armor, meaning it is only its dress version and would transform immediately to her armor at will.

“Okay, step number one! The hair,” Sophia started. “Men often find girls swaying their hair attractive, like those in the shampoo commercials! If you brush your hair like this with your hands,” She demonstrated it, “and flex your pretty hair… then combine it with a flutter of your eyelashes…”

“Voila! You’ll captivate them in no time!” She said, “Now do it!”

You bet that didn't go well at all, just by looking at Solene’s result.

“Stop! Stop! Y’all look like crazy witches! Stop brushing your hair like that, it's gonna look like hay!” Sophia told Mimosa. She sighed. “Look. Our trump card here is our faces. If we can't flex our bodies, flex our facial features! Use our voice, our words to seduce them!”

“Say these words: come with me.” She said in a low tone, saying it slowly and putting weight and emotions into each word, making sure that it was thoroughly delivered to their ears as an enchanting melody.

They shivered. “That doesn't sound like you at all.”

Sophia face-palmed. “Exactly! Because we’re going to pretend to be someone we aren't in order to get what we want! Manipulation, people!”

“That's so cool.” Solene’s eyes twinkled.

“I think we’re just gonna walk with our heads high,” Letoile said, and Mimosa nodded.

II. Alcoholic Prince Morgrim

This one is more of a bonus bit, really, unlike the others which are actual deleted scenes. I think it's interesting that Morgrim has a more distinct and different personality (albeit a Dark Lord necromancer, the Prince of the Underworld) than the Forsythes so far who are all business-minded. And though he IS also focused on his goal, he has this sort of jovial side, especially when it comes to wines and celebrations and entertainment.

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