1. It's Darkness under the lamp.

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Review by: iamjenlisasuperior
Author of the book : 2LAiNA

Title: 8/10

- The title seems too big but it fits the story (future) plot (I suppose) perfectly so I will give it 8.

Cover: 7/10

- The font used can be better and the edit on the characters faces seems a bit off, it can be improved.

Description: 9/10

- The description is short but tells the reader about the setting just fine and the writing style helps make it thrilling and mysterious.

Pace: 9/10

- The pace is perfect, since it is just 6 chapters I can't say much but I can tell that it's going to be a good story.

Concept and plot: 8/10

- The concept and plot is something not unheard of but the way it is written with some fun moments in it makes it intriguing to begin with.

Characters: 9/10

- The characters so far are all amazing with different personality traits to love them for, and their character development is also taking a toll on them.

Grammar: 8/10

- The grammar of the author is impressive but I did find some spelling errors here and there, like Chaeyoung was written as Chaseyoung quite sometimes and instead of writing gate it was written mate and etcetera.

Writing style: 10/10

- Writing style is a way to go, it hooked me from the very start, the way author makes everything mysterious and look like it's happening right in front of you is truly amazing.

Overall impression: 8/10

- I love the story since I am a mystery/thriller lover but honestly I am not into k-pop girlgroupxboygroup ships so it didn't quite fit in my taste but apart from that the story is one of a kind.

Rating of the book:: 8/10

Total: 84/100

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