The title is a perfect match for the story. It's short and perfect to give readers something new to check out. It's able to attract more readers because often readers find similar titles for different stories but this one is something different for sure.
Cover - 10/10
Wow! I like the hand on the cover. It's really horrific. And the pictures in the background are really fit for the story. For a moment I was afraid after seeing the hand. It gives the vibe something related to experimentation.
Blurb- 9/10
Amazing! Like it is short and quick to understand what's there in the story. I was really excited to read the chapters. The blurb is really capable of attracting more readers. You have written really well.
Grammar and vocabulary -8/10
At some places I found grammatical mistakes and typos but it's fine because overall the story is really amazing. Check the spelling errors before publishing. It would be helpful.
Character Development 8.5/10
Everything is really good but I think the characters need to be improved. I was confused somewhere. Like I couldn't understand the speciality of characters. However, it was okay. A little improvement is needed.
Concept and plot 9.5/10
Keep it up. I would say you must write it further and update fast. The story is really interesting and intriguing to read. Try to update fast. I liked the introductory chapter. And also the pictures are awesome and terrific.
Pace 8.5/10
It wasn't rushed. But try to improve and add more clarification between the characters.
Writing style 8/10
I must say the story is really interesting but the writing style is lacking somewhere. You need to improve your punctuation placement. Like it's not needed to put (.....)this everywhere. And also if you write like a novel it would be great to understand the expressions well. But it's good to read.
Overall presentation-8/10
Interesting. It was so good to read your story. Especially the pictures you have added. They are perfect for the dialogues. I like how you included dialogues in the pictures. Overall the story is awesome. Keep going with improvements.
Total- 86.5/100
Rating- 8/10
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