𝐒𝐇𝐀𝐃𝐎𝐖: 𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖 𝐒𝐇𝐎𝐏 𝐈𝐈

3. Life | Mafia AU |

Author:: Min_Hansun

Reviewer:: peacefulregrets

Title:: 2/10

Okay, I think that the title could be somewhat relevant to the story but what the author has published yet is just 3 chapters, so it's very difficult to give scores. I request authors to at least complete half of their books before putting them up for reviewing.

Cover:: 6/10

The cover is kinda messy but it does show relevancy to the context the story has reached yet.

Description:: 3/10

The description is not very attention - grabbing. Author must keep in mind that the description is a very vital component to attract readers.

Pace:: 7/10

As I said earlier, the book has just three chapters, so on the basis of those, the pace is moderate.

Concept and plot:: N/A

Characters:: 15/20

The author provided four chapters in the very start of the book, just as an introduction to the characters. Still, I don't feel like connecting to them, or exciting to know what happens to them. I'd love to see an improvement in this.

Grammar:: 8.5/10

A few grammatical mistakes were there. For instance, use of their instead of there, and a few more.

Writing style:: 4/10

From what I've read, the author seems to be new to storytelling. The story is not going in a flow, which could retreat a few readers into not completing the story. Wishing you very best on your writing journey and discovering the writing style that fits you the best.

Overall Impression:: 5/10

The story has three chapters only and it's very difficult to judge it according to that. I request the author to complete the book at least till half and re- submit it for the reviewing process.

Rating of the book:: 4/10

Total:: 54.5 /100

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