𝐒𝐇𝐀𝐃𝐎𝐖: 𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖 𝐒𝐇𝐎𝐏 𝐈𝐈

9. My fate PMJ × reader

Author of the book ru_my_bae

Review by praisy_143

Title: 8/10

It was a good suits but this is a very common book name. This story can have many other names which can make this book more different from the other kinds of stories.

Cover : 9/10

The cover was pretty good, simple as the story and the quote suited well with the title but it would have been better if the title of the book was up to down after the quote.

Description: 6/10

It was simple and nice but didn't gave much which needed and makes the reader feel the vibe from the description about the story it needs more information not only just characters introduction but also a introduction of story

Pace: 5/10

This story went a bit faster than it should have been in the first chapter. It felt like the story was starting from somewhere in the middle. If the story started about her wedding it should have been more clearer and the author didn't have to explain the attitude of y/n after a chapter.

And it should have been better if the book had more interaction of y/n and jimin rather than time skipping cuz it made it confusing about their relationship.

Concept & plot : 7/10

The concept which people commonly read for a short story and prefer these kind of one's was a good choice however the plot kinda don't match the starting concept of the theme like having psycho husband then soon after some time your happy and all it should have more good if it had the struggles of her after the incident.

Characters Development : 10/10

No doubt about the characters the personality suited well with the situation and the persons in choice

Grammar: 7/10

It was simple , had mostly dialogues was good in some terms but there here time when it need the narration to know the characters feeling how they were feeling and all , it didn't had that vibe of the character cuz the readers can't understand the situation just by what they were speaking it needed some information

Writing style: 7/10

Only thing is as grammar I said the writing style needs more narration in the story and also space between lines which makes it more confusing to read and look at the lines . These mistakes can make the readers lose interest in reading the story.

Overall impression: 7/10

A simple meaningful story , good for a soft story reader . The story contained many scenes which I enjoyed well there were mistakes also which need to be fixed apart from that it was a good story till now

Rating of the book : 7.5/10

Total : 73.5/100

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