𝐒𝐇𝐀𝐃𝐎𝐖: 𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖 𝐒𝐇𝐎𝐏 𝐈𝐈

89. The scars you healed

Author of the book - Optaemus_Prime

Reviewer - bts_army7saranghe

Title 9/10

It suits the story well and is able to attract more readers. It shows that there's something rom-com in the story and it was interesting. Title is the perfect match for the story.

Cover 6/10

It is modifiable. You can use various apps for the cover and also try to put a clear picture. Blurry pictures don't give a good impact but the clear one will. Try to change the design of your cover. Add something related to your story.

Blurb 9/10

It's interesting to read. Your description is well written and has the ability to attract more and more readers. It's short and to the point.

Grammar and vocabulary 10/10

Wow! It's really amazing. Your grammar and vocabulary is appreciable. I got to know so many new words and I also found out how the sentences should be written in that particular manner. It's really good.

Character development 8/10

I found it lacking somewhere but overall the whole is just wow. You should try to add some dialogues too. It would be amazing if you can modify it a little bit.

Concept and plot 9/10

The concept wasn't that unique but it was enjoyable to read. At least it was something which I wanted to read. Please update more for the readers to keep reading your book.

Pace 9/10

It was neither rushed nor slowed.

Writing style 9/10

Readable. It's comfortable to read and to understand. You have written in a constant and particular manner so that readers won't be distracted. I really appreciate your efforts and time.

Overall presentation 9/10

I enjoyed this story very much. Your writing style and vocabulary is just on another level. They are next to perfect. You should write more and more to explore and enhance yourself. I really appreciate your blurb and pace. Amazing! Just keep going with improvements.

Total 88/100

Rating- 8.5/10

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