Author of the book: ArdenTownsend
Reviewer: Sugaga777
Title: 8/10
The title of this book is good and unique but it's big for a book… The title mentions the whole concept though. Add a subtitle, it would be good.
Cover: 7/10
The cover seems well-edited and neat. It certainly describes the story's concept, but it is not eye-catching.
Blurb: 9.5/10
The blurb was in quick length and to the point. Use of quote is good, you can add some dialogues if you like. It was perfect.
Grammar and Vocabulary: 8/10
The use of grammar is fine, I found some grammatical errors and some misstructured sentences. The vocabulary was casual yet satisfying accordingly but I suggest you to use more complex words to make a nice atmosphere.
Pace: 10/10
The story is smooth and has no rush. It's very intriguing to read, everything is becoming more interesting. Many things were disclosed in the story.
Characters Development: 9.5/10
Characters have a good personality, according to their behaviour, they have some good emotional intelligence.
Concept and Plot: 10/10
The concept of the story is really great, it's very unique and bold to mention and write a story on a topic like this with different beings and not just humans.
Writing style: 9.5/10
Your writing style is good and decent like a novel. I have nothing much to say, it's really perfect.
Overall Presentation: 8.5/10
This book is a really good, unique concept with a thrilling and perfect amount of other emotions… You just need a more amazing cover, a subtitle… Other than that it's all good!
Rating of the book: 8.5/10
I enjoyed this book so much. Just a little more improvement.
Total: 88.5/100
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