𝐒𝐇𝐀𝐃𝐎𝐖: 𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖 𝐒𝐇𝐎𝐏 𝐈𝐈

20. Blood AND Ash

Author of the book :: SummerCharlton

Reviewby :: Sugaga777

Title:8/10

The title of this book is amazing and seems to follow up the story, even though the subtitle is small it amazingly fits the story. The title may have some meaning, I didn't have any idea about the story yet. So I'm not sure about it.

Cover: 9.5/10

The cover seems to support the story well, it especially suits the title, it's like the cover itself speaks to the title and the nature of the character. It's well-edited and neat.

Blurb: 9/10

Blurb was brisk but some rhetorical questions would make the readers inquisitive about the story. It's mysterious too, which is perfect according to me. 9 because it somehow shows just the dark love thing but not how the story is unnatural and beautiful.

Grammar and Vocabulary: 8/10

The use of grammar is simple and prosperous with preplanning words. There were some grammatical mistakes in the article. The vocabulary wasn't too strong but satisfying.

Pace: 10/10

The story is smooth and has no rush. It's very intriguing to read, it made me wonder about the baby Yoongi, Namjoon's behaviour and Taehyung. Like this story is awesome.

Characters Development: 9.5/10

Character descriptions at the start were acceptable, the characters that were mentioned till now show realistic personalities, emotions and character development.

Concept and Plot:10/10

The concept is very unnatural but the plot is twisted. The plotting has its intriguing mystery. There are not many stories on unnatural bantang and the one I read was not as strong as this story.

Writing style: 8.5/10

Your writing style is simple yet creative... but a little confusing at some points. Nothing much to say, well done! And one more thing, it would be good to have a trailer.

Overall Presentation: 9/10

It's an impressive book with great plotting. Overall, you are doing great, you just need to work on completing the story.

Rating of the book: 9/10

I enjoyed this book, I love supernatural stories, mostly on BTS. I believe as the chapters go by, the story will be an incredible remarkable book of all times. You have the potential to do so!

Total: 90.5/100

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