Review by: ABRTMSY10
Author of the book:
ShuKurenai2009Title: 6/10
The title is nice but a bit too common on Wattpad. It lacks a little connection with the story.Cover: 10/10
The cover is pretty and fits the story.Blurb: 8/10
It had a nice trailer. The description was pretty short but still gave a little insight of the story.Pace: 10/10
It had a good pace for a short story.Grammar and vocabulary: 5/10
I did notice a lot of grammatical errors but don't worry since they can be corrected so make sure to edit your book whenever you can.Character Development: 8/10
I love that the characters cleared their misunderstanding with proper communication at the end.Concept and plot: 10/10
The plot twist is insane. I liked how everything fell into place at the end.Writing style: 8/10
The writing is simple and easy to understand.Overall enjoyment: 7/10
I enjoyed reading this book. It had a nice plot but my only concern is the grammar so make sure you proofread your chapters before publishing them or if English isn't your first language you can concentrate on reading more books or just watching content in English.Rating of the book: 7/10
Total: 79/100
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