𝐒𝐇𝐀𝐃𝐎𝐖: 𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖 𝐒𝐇𝐎𝐏 𝐈𝐈

4. Moonstone

Author of the book:: PriskeBTuniverSe

Review by:: praisy_143

Title:  10/10

the title was nice it says about the main thing about the story it defines the story well

Cover: 6.5/10

I think if on the cover it was yoongi only not encluding jungkook and teahyung cuz they probably just came for a moment in a story and about the colour theme i think the story contains that dark theme about vampires and werewolf it would have been better if the persons and and filter background were in dark theme it would suited the story more

Description: 8/10

The description tells the story introduction very nicely it makes the first chapter very clear to be honest without it the first chapter would have been a bit complicated to understand…if the author wrote some more complex without writing in simple words it would will make the reader have more intrest in the story like "the clan of werewolves and vimpires which hate themselves" and so on to make the story more exciting

Pace: 8/10

To be clear i really liked how the story went most of the short stories pace is so quick you barley the complex theme but here it was well written, it showed the characters feeling all the chapters pace was written nicely i would like to tell that the final chapter was a bit rush it didn't showed yoongi's and y/n's feelings as it's the last chapter reader think of a emotional happy ending well there was happy ending the emotions were a bit lacked

Concept & plot: 8/10

The concept was unique i never saw a story of werewolves and villians as vampire the story was written nicely about the characters the roles were clear to understand and plot was good how the stone came to y/n how they manage to get it out defeat the head vampires they had a perfect time to understand only thing about the plot was when in last chapter yoongi was shocked that y/n knew about the mate thing it was simple making it more beautiful by having moonstone in the scene as that is the main part of the plot

Characters: 9/10

I really liked the characters the villians hero's role was nice making hero as werewolves and vampires as villain was a great Idea in last making y/n also a werewolf was epic the one thing which was that for jungkook and teahyung characters we saw them drinking bold and for the namjoon and yoongi we didn't saw anything if we were shown them changing themselves into there wolf would have been shown there power also

Grammar: 7/10

I think the story grammar was pretty simple and nice didn't experimented much easy to understand and read and yeah only puts some different was to express as for example 'luna" they were good well managed but it made the emotions a bit simple and pale to read if in that times the language was changed the grammar would have been perfect

writing style: 9/10

Simple,easy to understand, and read .. perfect! The writing was good the thing which impressed me was that how the beginning of the story started it was clear to understand how the story is beginning how yoongi is trying to find it how the people were able to sense  the moonstone i think the style lacked in last chapter on my expressing thought it felt like the last chapter was rush

Overall impression: 8/10

perfect to Recommend to a regular reader or new both of the majority can like this story pretty nice with language and all characters were epic the theme was .the plots were well written and nicely explained in short short paragraphs being also a reader of the story i really enjoyed it is appreciable . They were some smaller mistakes which can be changed the last was a bit lacked but all except that was good and comforting to read

Rating of the book: 8/10

Total : 81/100

The impression in the first read is pretty good i really liked the story nothing more.

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