𝐒𝐇𝐀𝐃𝐎𝐖: 𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖 𝐒𝐇𝐎𝐏 𝐈𝐈

18. Our strict father

Author of the book : @BTS_Army_here_2013

Reviewer praisy_143

Title: 8/10

The name suited the story a lot it showed the character , whom it is about and I felt like showed the meaning also of a bit silliness in my opinion but these names are bit common as this story can have so many titles cuz it's funny , enjoyable story the title can be more better to attract people and fans.

Cover : 7.5/10

You see it's good we have the character which a mostly talked about teahyung but the title and cover also need to match together here the title says "strict" but in cover he looks like a normal person doesn't seemed strict , the colour and fonts also don't match with the theme and the personality of him in the book but overall it's a simple cover which is good cuz the over designed cover should have not suited the book at all.

Description: 6.5/10

It talked about character and all but it was short didn't give much information it needs to be re- written and bit longer for the readers to more understand as this is one of the key part which attracts readers

Would have been great if we had a bit of dialogues or small fun para just like the story .

Pace : 8/10

I liked how the story went the chapters were nicely written according to the pace and length but when you reads it's the continuous days and it's bit slow according chapters which a written for the events happening in story , i recommend to fast forward the days and put more moments as it will also show the naughtiness and relationship of y/n.

Concept & plot : 9.5 /10

I truly enjoyed the theme it was fun to read and the plot were good in chapters having sometimes hangcliffers and sometimes don't which makes it more interesting...i believe the concept was truly iconic having bickering siblings, strict and romantic dad and a cool , funny dramatic mom and yeah the professor and friends it's pretty enjoyable for anyone to read but there were times when the story lacked a bit when can be unseen.

Characters: 10/10

I loved the characters !!! The main person y/n was funny and also mature, savage and what not . Teahyung strict and romantic perfectly matched with y/n and Aisha personalities and jungkook cherry on top as well as jimin this book is has very fun characters.

Grammar: 9/10

Simple,.easy, understandable and fun and perfect!! It was fun to read the pov's but sometimes it lacks a bit of grammar in the pov's.

Writing style: 8/10

Good good ....pov's very funny . The written style with some author drama is damn pretty good but sometimes the story needed some author pov's too which need to be kept in mind .

Overall impression: 8.5/10

It's pretty good for beginners, regularly reading person and also the ones who reads sometimes, it's very enjoyable and fun to read and also very interesting the cliffhangers were given on time and suspension was the best it's lacked a bit writing skills and the key points to attract reader title , cover and description but overall pretty good!

Rating of the book : 8.5/10

Total: 83.5/100

I truly recommend this story and will looking forward for more chapters

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