The title of this book is a perfect match of the story... In my opinion, adding a subtitle would be good.
Cover: 8.5/10
The cover seems well-edited and neat. It describes the story concept, the flame and the emotions but it isn't eye-catching.
Blurb: 7.5/10
The blurb was in quick length. It describes the story very well. you must add some dialogue, quotes, and rhetorical questions, to catch some readers.
Grammar and Vocabulary: 9.5/10
The use of grammar is nice, but I found some grammatical errors. Punctuation was on point. The vocabulary was casual and rich which fit the atmosphere of the story.
Pace: 8/10
The story is smooth and has no rush. It's very intriguing to read, everything is becoming more interesting and relatable. But at some point, some scenes were not properly understood.
Characters Development: 10/10
Characters have a good personality and realistic personality. Most of Jimin's, his personality was mostly relatable and realistic, a perfect perfection craving person. It actually reminds me of real Jimin's personality and struggle.
Concept and Plot: 10/10
The concept of the story is great, it's not common to openly write about this concept, writers may find it hard to come up with a narrative story idea like this. The concept perfectly shows the pressure, frustration, struggle, and negative thoughts a person goes through.
Writing style: 9.5/10
Your writing style is amazing. The emotion you explain through metaphor is creative, it's totally like a novel. The thoughts inside Jimin, you describe it very well!
Overall Presentation: 8.5/10
This book is really good, I really like the concept and the reliability it holds. You just need to work on cover, blues and describing some scenes.
Rating of the book: 9/10
I enjoyed this book. It's interesting, relatable, full of real emotions, to be honest. The one who read would feel every bit of it!
Total: 90/100
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