Title: 9.5/10 The title of this book is a perfect match of the story… The subtitle was magical and really beautiful from a story perspective.
Cover: 8.5/10 The cover seems well-edited and neat. It describes the story concept magically and romanticly, but it isn’t eye-catching.
Blurb: 7.5/10 The blurb was in quick length. It describes the story in an interesting manner. you must add rhetorical questions, and a brief summary of the story with 2-5 lines.
Grammar and Vocabulary: 6.5/10 The use of grammar is nice, but I found some grammatical errors like tense and typos. For punctuation, I must say from the start it was messy. There are some points to remember to cope up with the standard:
There should not be gap between word and punctuation When you write a dialogue, the comma should be inside the quotation marks if you have to continue the story part. If not then the full stop should be inside the quotation mark.
For example:
“So you know about them,” Tae asked.
The other one is:
Tae said, “I wish hyung also loves Jimin back as he does.”
First letter of a name should always be capital, as I saw in some parts, it was written in small letters.
The vocabulary was casual yet fits the atmosphere of the story, but I suggest you use complex words.
Pace: 10/10 The story is smooth and has no rush. It's very intriguing to read, everything is becoming more interesting with fun and secrets.
Characters Development: 10/10 Characters have a good personality and realistic personality. I like Jungkook’s double side personality. It's kinda exciting.
Concept and Plot: 10/10 The concept of the story is great, the concept of meeting a person at a class reunion and then actually falling for that person is unexpected. I like the complex situations that can arise in the same-gender love life.
Writing style: 8.5/10 Your writing style is good. The emotions were good, but I tried to explain them through lines even though it takes time to write. I saw this in the starting chapters.
Overall Presentation: 8/10 This book is really good, I really like the concept. You just need to work on cover and blurb.
Rating of the book: 8.5/10 I enjoyed this book. It's interesting, full of real emotions, to be honest.
Total: 87/100
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