Although it matches the story but try to modify it a little bit. Only 17 as a title doesn't define actual context. Try to add a specific word to understand what 17 represents.
Cover : 9/10
The cover is captivating and it suits the story as well. It's really amazing to use a candle in the background. It adds up a glow in your cover and matches the blurb perfectly.
Blurb: 8.5/10
The blurb was quick and deep. I got the whole storyline and it's appreciated that you used good words to explain what nature was exactly. I like the concept of history you added in your blurb.
Grammar and vocabulary: 6/10
Although overall it was appreciated, I was quite confused somewhere in reading the sentences and few mistakes were there. You can improve it easily. But the uses of words are quite impressive.
Character Development : 7/10
I liked the characters, how it depicted fun and seriousness too. With the increasing chapters I understood the characters more easily. Overall it was fine with it but at some points it lacked. Upload more chapters to know it more.
Concept and plot : 8/10
Wow! Really I like how you correlate the story with the past history. Personally I love to read these types of books and it was good to read. I would suggest continuing with it.
Pace : 8/10
Few scenes were rushed where it should have more conversations but it's okay. Overall neither too rushed nor slow.
Writing style : 5/10
I liked your work but your writing style isn't good enough to have more readers. Instead of putting brackets or stars to express the scenes you should make it as a novel like "Ananis got up from his chair and stepped ahead in order to have a glass of water." It attracts more readers and makes it easier to read.
Overall presentation : 7/10
Your concept, your plot,your cover overall everything was good but you need improvements in writing style so overall it was good to read this book. Keep going with improvements.
Rating of the book 7/10
Total :: 72.5/100
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