A very common title . Yet the title depicted some curiosity , with layers to be explored . It left me guessing what the story is about and eventually more curious to read the book .
Cover: 5 / 10.
The cover is good but could have been better . I wasn't able to guess what the censored thing meant in the cover yet it gave off a dark vibe . The book cover has potential, but it fails to deliver. The design feels uninspired, common and lacks creativity. It fails to capture the essence of the story or convey any emotion.
The typography is bland, common and uninteresting, making the subtitle or the words written below the title hard to read. The colour palette is dull and doesn't draw the eye. Overall, the cover could have been so much better with a little more effort and imagination. Moreover the author's name is not visible.
Description: 6/10
It could have been longer and a bit more detailed . A bit of detailing and more words were needed . It didn't even seem like a summary and more of a small passage . This won't attract the readers as readers mostly read the book after reading the blurb. And the same type of description can be seen in many books as people are writing more dark nowadays.
Just showing the male lead as a possessive maniac and the female lead as a fragile maiden doesn't make the blurb interesting .
Pace: 7/10
It was Perfect.The descriptions in each chapter were good but could have been better. The story was smooth. Jungkook's entry and the characters were easy to understand.
Concept and plot: 6/ 10
Well the concept was pretty guessable. After reading the first 2 chapters I kind of figured out the whole story which is regarding the past life of violet , tortures and abuse done on her making her run away from Jungkook but after a few years he's back. Quite common.
Characters: 8/ 10
Song Violet (female lead) . As depicted by the author she's a confident, brave and modern girl with a dark past and fragile heart . She showed a hint of past traumas which made her turn into a strong girl but she wasn't able to end or hide her actual personality .
Jungkook
Well I think here Jungkook's character is exaggerated a lot i mean yes a mafia leader has a dark aura , ego and attitude but others referring him as 'King' or his hyungs (older brothers ) being scared of him sounds like he is the over and all who got no respect to elders nor to the closest one . Being cold doesn't mean a stone hearted human with no love and empathy .
Eunwoo &Jennie , Taehyung &Jimin.
Well they are side characters who make the story smooth . The side characters played a crucial role in the story. They have added depth and complexity to the plot, helping to create a more immersive and engaging experience for the readers. Without side characters, the story would have felt flat and one-dimensional, lacking the necessary depth to truly resonate with readers.
Grammar: 5/10
In the story , several grammatical errors were noticed. The chapters contained a significant number of subject-verb agreement mistakes. Additionally, there were several instances of improper use of punctuation marks, such as missing commas and periods.
Writing style: 6 /10
Make use of different words to make the chapters look professional .Improving a story's writing style can greatly enhance the reader's engagement with the narrative. Common mistakes such as weak characterization, poor pacing, awkward dialogue, and inconsistent tone can all be addressed through careful revision.
One effective strategy is to focus on the story's central conflict and ensure all plot points and character actions are in service of that conflict.
Overall impression: 7/10
I liked the book and was looking forward to the development of the characters . I hope when more chapters are published the wishes are fulfilled .
Rating of the book: 7/10
Please don't get discouraged . The book is good but the silly mistakes are the main reason for the given score .
Total :: 64 /100
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