𝐒𝐇𝐀𝐃𝐎𝐖: 𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖 𝐒𝐇𝐎𝐏 𝐈𝐈

64. The matchmaker

Authors of the book: Prose36

Reviewer: bts_army7saranghe

Title 9/10

The title perfectly matches the story. It's directly connected to the storyline. I like how you have chosen the title which attracts more readers and is well presented.

Cover 8/10

The cover is overall good and well mannered but it could have been modified according to the story and its plot. But it's fine if you keep it too. Because the story is really nice.

Blurb 10/10

Perfect! You have chosen the perfect way of explaining the entire story in a few paragraphs. It really made me want to read it instantly. The way you have used examples and then explained the characters is just amazing and appreciable.

Grammar and Vocabulary 19.5/20

Uses of words and expressions are really well presented with neatness and clarity. I found some new words too and added them to my vocabulary. I found it easy to understand and grammar is really manageable.

Character development 7/10

Everything is up to mark but the characters made me somehow feel out of the track. Like I was not okay with the characters Sanika and Lalit. Lalit was out of the context. Amarya's character needed something different, she deserves happiness. However, it was fun to read.

Concept and plot 9/10

Really appreciate the plots and the suspense. I love reading these kinds of books. I like how you twisted the plots and also I was actually expecting more chapters but it ended soon.

Pace 9/10

I am fine with the pace. Neither crushed nor slowed. Well executed with development.

Writing style 9/10

Your way of writing is really good. I really enjoyed reading and I would say you are a good writer. Your presentation of punctuation and expressions are really well defined.

Overall presentation 8/10

Although the character development is lacking, it was worth reading. The main point is your blurb. I am really amazed by your way of expressing the main concept in just a few lines and paragraphs. It was funny too. Uses of metaphor and personification are well expressed. The humour is unbreakable too. Keep going with improvements.

Total 88.5/100

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