Author:: bts_army7saranghe
Reviewer:: peacefulregrets
Title:: 6/10
The title of the book, while relevant, lacks the captivating allure that would make readers eager to pick it up. It could benefit from something more intriguing and unique.
Cover:: 5/10
The book's cover, featuring the main character with bold black font for the title, falls short of being visually appealing. A more engaging design could draw potential readers in.
Description:: 8/10
The book's description shines as it successfully piques the reader's interest, offering a glimpse into the story's potential.
Pace:: 8/10
The pacing of the narrative is well-executed, ensuring that readers remain engaged throughout their reading journey.
Concept and plot:: 6/10
While my review is based on the portion I've read, the plot appears to be rather common and lacks a unique twist. Additionally, the presence of numerous plot holes can be distracting.
Characters:: 7/10
In a dialogue-driven story, the character development stands out as commendable, offering readers well-crafted personas to connect with.
Grammar:: 3/10
The presence of numerous grammatical and spelling errors detracts from the overall reading experience. An extensive editing pass is needed.
Writing style:: 2/10
The author's writing style leaves room for improvement. The narrative lacks the ability to evoke curiosity, excitement, or anticipation in the reader. The enjoyment factor is notably lacking.
Overall Impression:: 4/10
While the book has some redeeming qualities such as a decent description and well-developed characters, it is weighed down by issues in grammar, writing style, and a plot that lacks originality and contains plot holes.
Rating of the book:: 4/10
The overall rating for the book would be a 4 out of 10. It shows potential in certain aspects but requires significant revisions, particularly in terms of grammar and writing style, to truly captivate its audience. Ik the writer is putting in all her efforts and I wish her best of luck for future.
Total: 49/100
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