Impressive! It looks nice and actually is attractive but my suggestion would be , if the cover was more detailed for each character it would have been because now it's a bit out of character and the colour palette. The colours are not matched with the book.
Description: 10/10
It was short and sweet , it felt really thrilling to read it and actually made have a look and read the book
Pace: 9.5/10
It is at the right pace.
Concept & plot: 9/10
Never saw this type of story in my life to be honest , I would love to see how you work on it … but just make sure you won't add the same plot again and add new more.
Characters: 9/10
I liked how you portrayed everyone but would have been nice if you have introduced them a bit
Grammar: 10/10
Everything seems so perfect!
writing style: 10/10
I personally really liked how it is written. It looks good and actually makes me understand every context.
Overall impression: 10/10
Now the story is going so well that I will personally read the story till the end. Everything is just so perfect: plot, grammar,story formation, description etc…
Rating of the book: 10/10
Total : 93.5/100
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