Simple , explains a lot about the story but according to me to make the reader be more interested in your book you have to give your book a title which explains but also doesn't give direct hints. Like here the story gives the hint about a guy making a girl sign a contract for being his girlfriend which can be improved for the title.
Cover: 9.5/10
Impressive! It looks nice and actually is attractive but my suggestion would be , if the face claimed a different expression would have been nice because the story describes him as a guy who is cold but sweet to his loved ones but the expression in the cover is not like that but rather a guy who is naughty yet fun.
Description: 10/10
It was short and sweet , it felt really thrilling to read it and actually made me want to l have a look and read the book
Pace: 8/10
The starting felt very rushed. Starting the story with flashbacks and rushing to make bonding and the deal between both the leads would have been nice if it was slow.
Concept & plot: 9/10
To be honest , I have seen the concept many times in different books but the plot felt different from others. Looking forward to the plot and how it shapes the story.
Characters Development : 8/10 I liked how the two different personalities were but if the pace was not too fast it would have been fun to get to know the characters slowly.
Grammar and Vocabulary : 7.5/10 The grammar was simple and decent which I love . But it lacked the ability to show emotions and I found many mistakes in the grammar.
writing style: 8/10
Again decent . If the paragraphs were long and the inner voice of the characters was portrayed would have been great.
Overall impression: 7/10
Loved the plot! The book needs some changes which are easy to make and would have a great impact on the storyline and writing… I'm looking forward to the improvement!
Rating of the book: 7/10
Total : 83/100
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