The title suits the story well but it could have been better according to the theme.
Cover : 7/10
It's good that it is according to the theme but the borders starting from the mid to the title are a bit messy. My suggestion would be to either remove them or put them correctly in the border . Fonts can also be changed.
Description: 8.5/10
The description was good and thrilling but if it was more structured then the lines could have matched each other better.
Pace : 9/10
For me it felt decent. It was understandable just a thing that it felt rushed at first.
Concept & plot: 9/10
Not gonna lie I read this concept many times but the story had its own twists and turns which I really enjoyed while reading.
Characters Development: 9/10
I loved all of the characters. They felt nice together and I enjoyed them from the start .
Grammar and Vocabulary: 8/10
It was good , understandable and easy…I liked how you expressed the moments. it just lacked in some scenes , I feel the use of words could have been better to enhance the vibe of the scenes.
Writing style: 6/10
The writing style was messy. The first chapters need some editing like the first chapters and last chapters writing have a huge difference which needs to be fixed . The inner thoughts or the talkings can be fixed . And chats which are shown could have been better. If They were edited in the way our usual chats are like the sender's chat on the right while the replyer’s on the left. And I noticed one chapter is written in the middle
Overall impression: 7/10
The storyline and concepts were epic !.I liked the characters but they were cases where grammar and writing was messy. To improve if the book could be edited another time , it could attract a lot of readers.
Rating of the book: 7/10
Total: 79.5/100
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