Book name: Amelia: The Ghost Of Pigeon Manor
Author of the book: WritingInTrinity
Reviewer: bts_army7saranghe
Title 9/10
It perfectly matches the story.
Cover 7/10
The current cover is okay but you can make it more attractive by adding some pictures related to the characters and story.
Blurb 8/10
The blurb is short and quick. It's easy to understand the story's plot.
Pace- 7.5/10
It was kinda rushed for me. Because of the lack of chapters and few plots in a chapter.
Grammar and vocabulary 9/10
The use of vocab perfectly fits the story. I like how you used some unique words and made it more interesting to read.
Character Development 18/20
The story is neither too long nor has more chapters. So accordingly it's fine.
Concept and plot 8/10
I like the plot. The suspense was killing me.
It would be great if you could have added more chapters.
Writing style 9/10
It's just like a novel.
I like how you used long paragraphs. It kept me busy reading more and more.
Overall presentation 8/10
However there are some mistakes which can be modified. Like adding more plots and conversation. Try to make the character's personality more clear to the readers...overall it was nice to read a short and quick story.
Total 73.5 /100
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