Review by: Taekook_mafia_007
Author of the book: naira_rpwp
Title: 9/10
“Cacophony Inside” is a great title for a book. It suggests a story filled with internal conflict and emotional turmoil, which can attract readers who are curious about the characters' inner struggles. The title perfectly matches with the storyline of this book and is unique too.
Cover: 6/10
The cover isn't well edited. The author's name is quite small and easy to miss. Increasing the font size or placing it in a more noticeable spot would give it better visibility. The main title "Cacophony Inside" could be made more prominent by increasing its size or changing its font to something bolder. The handwritten parts, especially "open your heart for me ma'am" and "still yours...," are a bit small and could be made larger to enhance readability. The text "Love can't express what's in my soul" is a bit hard to read because of the font color and background. Consider using a clearer, more contrasting color or adding a slight shadow or outline to make it stand out.Blurb: 7/10
The blurb of "Cacophony Inside" is intriguing and gives a glimpse into the emotional and psychological depth of the story. This blurb is poetic and intriguing, offering a glimpse into a deep and emotional story. It hints at a complicated relationship filled with longing and vivid memories. Some suggestions to improve the blurb is that the writer should start the blurb with a strong opening line to capture reader's attention. Break the text into shorter lines for easier reading.Pace: 8/10
The pace of the story was very slow at many places as if only the inner thoughts of the characters were being revealed and nothing else. It is also good to share inner thoughts but readers lose interest at one point while reading them.Character Development: 10/10
Every character has been described very well.
The emotion of each character is described very well. There are many characters in this book and the writer has done a good job in describing each character.Grammar and Vocabulary: 9/10
There were not many noticeable grammatical mistakes but the writer should take care of the punctuation marks.Concept and plot: 9/10
The concept of this story is truly admirable. The story of each character has been written very well. Each character has been described very well and their story has also been explained well.Writing style: 8/10
The writing style of this writer is very amazing. All things are described very well. In some chapters the paragraphs are very lengthy and readers tend not to read them, so I would suggest making them shorter. At some places the dialogues are very long and it is not clear where the dialogue starts and where it ends.Overall enjoyment: 7/10
I really enjoyed reading this book. The storyline is amazing and I'm really looking forward to read the upcoming chapters.Rating of the book : 8/10
Total: 81/100
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