Title: 9.5/10 The title of this book is amazing and suits the story, I like the subtitle.
Cover: 7/10 The cover seems well-edited but didn't describe or suit the story, only main characters are displayed on the cover. Maybe some great idea would work to enhance its true beauty.
Blurb: 8/10 The blurb was snappy but to the point. Some rhetorical questions would work as material to wind up the intrigue among the readers. 8 because maybe adding some more lines would be beneficial.
Grammar and Vocabulary: 7/10 The use of grammar is good. But there would be no gaps between punctuation and words, not even for the "double inverted commas" you use for writing dialogues. There are no major grammatical errors, I found. The vocabulary was satisfying yet casual. Minor errors can be neglected so no issue. Please use capital letters when needed.
Pace: 10/10 The story is smooth and has no rush. It's very intriguing to read, the start was so fun but at the end it was a mystery, eventually that was clear as I read further. This story is amazing.
Characters Development: 9.5/10 Characters described have causal behaviour yet show realistic personalities, and emotions… not much to say!
Concept and Plot:10/10 The concept of mafia story…. But didn't feel like one. Mostly it was like a person fighting to show themselves. The plotting is intriguing.
Writing style: 7/10 Your writing style is good… yet messy. You should keep space between big paragraphs, it was so hyper up to read. done!
Overall Presentation: 8/10 It's an outstanding book with great plotting. Overall, you have been doing great. Just need a good cover, improvement in grammatical errors mentioned, and some creative ideas.
Rating of the book: 8.5/10 I enjoyed this book, I also don't smile often and reading tho shook was relatable! You have the potential to do better. Keep going!!
Total: 84.5/100
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