Title: 9/10 It's a perfect match to the story. It suits the story well. Short and two word titles are always attractive to the audience. I like the way you put the title. Sometimes a few words hold a lot of meanings and emotions. That's what your title reflects. Good thoughts.
Cover: 10/10 Fabulous! It looks realistic. Its authenticity is amazing. It's clear and simple. The title and cover reflect the same meaning. The cover is really pretty and makes me want to immerse myself into your story. I liked the background of your cover and its colour choice. Good artistic work.
Blurb: 10/10 Short and to the point blurb/description. Anyone can easily understand the plot or what the story is about. Your use of words in the blurb is really amazing and I have to say that your cognition is really well maintained. Really loved your blurb.
Grammar and vocabulary: 10/10 Perfect! Your vocabulary is really amazing. I have to admit that you are really a great writer. I have never read any book with this much perfection. Your grammar, your vocab, your punctuation... Everything is perfect to be a good writer. I am amazed by the authenticity your words hold. Idioms are great too. I am really amazed by your work. Seriously keep going with this perfection.
Character development: 9/10 Everything is good but somewhere I think a little development in the characters is needed. Not a big deal because everything is really fine. Just a little improvement and just putting this forward, I loved all the characters. Siren's character is really well explained.
Concept and plot: 9/10 The plot is interesting and well explained through the blurb. Although it's not uncommon,your creativity makes it interesting. Try to upload once a week.
Pace: 8/10 It's also on the track but needs more chapters. Try to add more conversations and update once a week.
Writing style: 10/10 This needs to be up to the mark for more readers and yes, in your book it's explained well. Your writing style is really readable and easy to get what you are trying to convey. Although a few words are not understandable, it's good to add them. Writing style works as a decoration to books and it's really great that you have a good vocab and writing style. I would suggest that you keep writing this way.
Overall enjoyment: 9.5/10 I don't think anything is left but I would like to appreciate your efforts and work. It's a really good story. I will read once it's all completed but please try to update it soon so that readers won't get disappointed. Otherwise it's really a fabulous one.
Rating of the book: 9/10
Total: 93.5/100
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