Author:: MeghanTwiliaBU
Reviewer:: peacefulregrets
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Title: 7/10
The title aligns well with the concept and plot, creating a sense of coherence.
Cover: 7/10
While the typography is commendable, the cover could benefit from enhanced visual appeal to capture potential readers' attention more effectively.
Description: 9/10
The description excels in enticing readers, generating curiosity with compelling dialogues. It effectively draws readers into the narrative.
Pace: 7/10
The pacing is generally smooth but has room for improvement to create a more engaging reading experience.
Concept and Plot: 7.5/10
While the concept isn't groundbreaking, the plot is executed well, maintaining a solid foundation for the narrative.
Characters: 6/10
The introduction of numerous characters at the beginning may pose challenges for readers unfamiliar with them, impacting initial connection and engagement.
Grammar: 3/10
The presence of numerous grammatical errors disrupts the flow of the narrative, emphasising the need for thorough proofreading and editing.
Writing Style: 4/10
The writing style requires significant improvement, marked by errors and plot holes that hinder the overall storytelling experience.
Overall Impression: 5/10
The book leaves room for enhancement, with notable aspects such as pacing, character introduction, grammar, and writing style requiring attention. You got this, all the best!
Rating of the Book: 5/10
Total: 48.5/100
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