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Calamity Trio of Boring: After Friend Talk

TW: Mentions of child abuse because some idiot thinks the punishment for kids not being able to stand up to abusive adults is to abuse them. I'm sure that will teach them to do a better job next time.

Edit: I don't really care if Amphibia fans, who are like 7 years old, think this edgy bullshit is amazing, but when actual adults start criticizing him, he goes "nope, I don't want to hear it". When you shaft people who are adults and experienced in writing for children who praise you all day. You're not a good writer.

I'm writing everything into a single post to see if that helps me vent my frustration. I can't believe anyone would write this, and I think my friends and I would praise it for how amazing it is.

First: Writing a story because you hate how a show ended is fine, deciding that the "fix" should be torturing and abusing the characters for not perfectly standing up to an abusive adult is not. "Anne was on the earth for too long, Marcy knew how to get home but didn't tell them, and Sasha wasn't good enough". And those are reasons to stalk children, wait until they grow up, kidnap and abuse them, and then mind control them to kidnap and abuse children from other kids' show media? That was your FIX to Amphibia season 3 and NATURAL CONTINUATION?????????

Second: Roman is not a sympathetic villain whose actions are justifiable because "he lost his family so all of this is okay, he's the true victim". Because no. People who are depressed over losing family can misinterpret events, so maybe that's the reason he blames a literal child and never the abusive adult. But to stalk kids, wait until they grow up, abuse them, and mind control them to abuse other kids to "show their true colors as evil abusers" is... hello PROJECTION.

That's not the worst of it. Roman is the strongest being in the universe, immune to all damage and status effects, and anyone who disagrees with him is instantly portrayed as the villain. I could give a pass for these if he were entertaining. But this candy cane-sniffing loser will go on speeches in role-plays about how much better he is than everyone else in the room. He has the strongest weapons in every universe and can vaporize worlds with them, SO BE CAREFUL.

Third: 10 series, 10 SERIES. You added the Owl House, the only other show that shares most of the fan base, but then you added Call of Duty, FNAF, and Sonic (to name 3). You added 9 series to your fan fiction and explained NONE of them under the assumption that "I know them so everyone else must know them". That isn't even the least of the issues because you continued to add a Mario fan game and someone else's Owl House fan fiction expecting your readers to KNOW BOTH OF THEM WITHOUT LINKS.