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Because you clearly don't care about how people think unless they're praising you and you've deleted every single comment of people giving real criticism. I see no problem revealing the name of your story.
For everyone else: I think what pisses me off the most about this guy is that he constantly says he wants criticism and advice, but the second he gets it, he ignores it all. He has gotten criticism from so many people and places and his response is always to ignore it like it never existed. Yet he'll leave up things like "I love this fan fiction! Best crossover ever!" And then he uses that to prove everyone loves his story and he's never gotten any criticism ever. And you know what, SETH? You deserve the horrid reputation you have on every server you've ever touched, but that's not your echo chamber.
To the author: I have given you real criticism so many times, but your response has always been to ignore me and keep going like you're writing a story that will change the universe with how perfect and amazing it is. So, all of this is YOUR fault. Get your FUCKING ego checked because you're NOT the Wright Brothers, you're NOT going to make history with how AMAZING your story is, and you're NOT the greatest writer in history. STOP acting like you're above everyone in the universe and that you're so AMAZING that criticism is always invalid.
But for SOME REASON, "I want criticism" means "give me praise and tell me I'm the best writer in the universe".
THIS IS YOUR FAULT FOR TREATING PEOPLE WHO GIVE YOU THE ADVICE YOU SAY YOU WANT LIKE THEY'RE IDIOTS FOR NOT WORSHIPPING YOUR SHITSTORM OF A FAN FICTION.
AME'S REVIEW
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EMERALD'S REVIEW
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"This guy selects designated heroes and villains and then has them automatically win or lose based on that, not their actions.
In a real story, the characters' actions determine their alignment. In stories where Roman is the protagonist, you're either predetermined to be a good person or a bad person."
