OC belongs to @BruhIDK67
Name: Ibex
Not gonna lie at first I thought this had something to do with the desert, like onyx or something, but no it's actually a type of goat. So, yeah, it's fit, and I like it actually!
Age: 6
Cool.
Gender: Born Female (Non-binary)
Hey same hat.
Sexuality: Straight
Alright.
Tribe: Skywing
Neat
Appearance: Scales: Ruby Red | Under scales: Crimson | Horns: Black | Eyes: Yellow | Wings: They don't have wings/missing a leg.
I would say add some more details on their belly / other scale colours, and also their bodyshape and whatnot. Also, which leg are they missing?
Personality: Cold, Kinda rude, Loyal, Determined, Easily annoyed.
This is a 'eh' personality so far, pretty standard, but not that bad. I would say add some more positive traits, like maybe they are smart or good at reading people, and maybe one or two more negative ones, like maybe they tend to push people away due to their coldness / rudeness.
Occupation: Waiting.
Alright
Residence: They are always moving so anywhere I guess ._.
._. I have never used that emoticon before
Relatives: Unknown
Oof
Friends: Toad (Mudwing), Flora (Rainwing), Abhor (Nightwing), Horus (Sandwing), Moana (Seawing).
I like these names, and Moana is a reference to movie, isn't it?
Abilities: Ibex is very small and can climb through small spaces. They can also breath fire.
Cool.
Backstory: Ibex was born in the sky kingdom to two loving parents. When Ibex hatched they had no wings and were missing a leg. Several dragons saw this and went to tell the queen. The queen sent guards to take the child and throw them into the nearby ravine, but when they arrived the child and the parents were nowhere in sight. Ibex and their parents went into hiding for four years until they were found by a SkyWing patrol. Ibex watched as their parents were killed simply because Ibex existed. Ibex managed to escape and fled the Sky Kingdom to find somewhere they could be happy. Ibex ran for what seemed like day until they came across Toad wondering the woods In search of food. Toad later introduced Ibex to all his friends (the ones mentioned above) and Ibex joined the group of misfits.
Add some details about their childhood growing up with their parents, and maybe what happens after they meet Toad and his friends, as their age is listed as six but they met Toad when they were four.
Overall, I give Ibex a 6.5/10. Work majorly on their appearance and personality, and a little bit on their backstory.
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