( FINISHED ) Wings of Fire OC Rating

Valley

OC belongs to @lynxIW

Name: Valley (like between two mountains)

Unique, I like it.

Age:  7 (dragon years)

Okay

Gender: Female

Alright

Tribe: skywing

Cool

Sexuality: straight as a stick

Nice

Looks: Rose red scales along her main body but has speckles of bright orange along her back, wings and tail. She has pastel yellow wing tips and horns and a pastel red underbelly. She has bright blue eyes

Add things like her height, bodyshape, etc

Personally: A bold and fearless dragon,  jumps into battle at any chance she can get. Has a temper but try's her best to stay calm with others,  very indecisive and basically refuses to believe she is wrong.
Likes: Taking long flights by herself, fighting and battle training, observing scavengers and other animals, reading.
Dislikes: being lied to, being proved wrong,  Being bound or tied up,  her mate (in backstory)
Strengths: fighting, flying (obviously), reading,  arguing, sun bathing, her mother
Weaknesses:  not good hunter, has temper, ignorant, foolish, refuses to be showed she was wrong, gets tense easily

She seems pretty well-rounded.

Family: mother~ Skywing called summit .   father~ Unknown  Sister~ Peak
Friends: a skywing named crane, a mud wing named Scylla (kind of mud crab)
Crush:  None
Mate: a skywing named Cormorant
Dragonets: none

Like the names.

Backstory: *backstory for the backstory* (skywings are at war with the icewings, the skywing queen has discovered that if a fire scale dragon breeds with another fire scale dragon the egg is almost certainly a twin egg, she makes a breeding program for fire scales to make herself soldiers, dragons without fire are nobles for "giving their fire" for the soldiers, this program is called the firefly program) *ok time for character backstory * When valley hatched, she hatched with her sister, peak. They were very close until the age of 5 when the "firefly program" begins, they were separated and while peak learned reading & writing valley learned how to fight and how to take down an enemy. Every night valley and peak would secretly meet up and teach each other what they had learned that day, valley took up an interest for reading though she could never touch the scrolls, this went on for a while until the two had a falling out, valley was the best fighter in her class and was said she was going to be appointed as one of the queen's personal guards, peak had always wished she had had the fire scales  and easily got jealous of her sisters success, she stopped showing up to the meetings and the two never talked any more. Soon after valley was appointed the queen's guard and often bumped into her sister. Valley soon became close with the sky wing  Princess crane, and one of the mud wings visiting the sky kingdom, Scylla.  Valley went into battle many times, the one battle that truly haunted her was the attack on the skywing palace, icewings poured out of every inch of the sky and blew freezing  blasts of frost breath at the innocent sky wings, the fire fly dragons counter attacked since the frost breath didn't work on them but while valley was fighting, she heard a terrifying scream and saw her sister fall from the sky, she has been fighting, trying to prove she could fight but with no fire she failed, valley tried to reach her before she slammed into the ground but was too late, the skywings ended up winning the battle. After many long moons of guarding the queen she was told she was entering the third stage of the firefly program (first being learning battle training, second a guard job, third having a mate and eggs) Valley objected but soon caved and entered the third stage. She was assigned to a sky wing named Cormorant but never had eggs with him due to him running off with another sky wing.

This is good! Like the Firefly program bit. Maybe add a few details like her relationship with her parents (her mom was out as one of her strengths?), her friendship with the princess and Scylla, etc, etc

Other:
Fanfic: Nothing yet since I can't write :P
Reason for creating: didn't really have a sky wing oc yet so I made one and now she's my favourite oc

Cool facts. I'll keep my eyes open for the fic : )

Overall, I give Valley a 7.5/10. Work on her appearance and a bit on her backstory.