( FINISHED ) Wings of Fire OC Rating

Gila / Gianna

OC belongs to @animussaviourtribute

Name: Gila/ Gianna

Bit of an odd name, but I like it.

Age: at the start of the story, she is 2 and by the end is around 12, or 36 human years

Alright.

Gender: Female

Okay.

Sexuality: Straight

Cool.

Tribe: Pure Sandwing though she can turn into a scavenger

...that's something I've never seen before. My interest is peaked.

Appearance: She has sort of ombre scales. The tips are pale, the middle is a little darker and the ends are a lot darker. Her underbelly is the middle shade as is her tail barb. She has a tattoo of a rattlesnake around her wrist. She has a muscular build and is strong. In her scavenger form, her hair is long and often in a ponytail. They go with her scale colour. She has a narrow face and is tall as well as skinny.

For her dragon form, add her height, build, etc. Also, what colour of ombre does she have? Gold? Yellow? Beige? And in her Scavenger form, what goes with her scale colour? Her hair? Skin?

Personality: Not very social, and often can get people upset really easily. She only really trusts and loves people close to her. And when she loves somebody, she is super overprotective of them.

Add more flaws, and a few more virtues. This is really bland.

Likes: Lost, her friends and family, being a scavenger
Hates: The Revenge, traitors, and scavenger history

Alright, but what do you mean by 'Lost'?"

Relatives: Her sister Ocotillo/Olive, her father Lion, her mother Sahara, her mate/husband Stargazer/Noah, her brother in law Wildcat/ Axle, her sister in law Moonlight/Luna/Sam and her daughter Summer

All these names are pretty cute, especially Summer.

Friends: Atlantic/Alana, Aloe, Salamander (past), Yucca (past) and Cobra (past)

Again, nice names!

Crush: Stargazer/ Noah who later becomes her mate/husband

Okay.

Abilities: Normal Sandwing stuff. And can turn into a scavenger

Alright.

Hobbies: Reading to her daughter and running her small healing centering Lost.

Okay.

Backstory:

Note: This takes place in a world where Queen Oasis never died. All the tribes are at peace, though the Nightwings are still in hiding at the beginning. The crime rate has increased and violence is more accepted, even among dragonets

When Gila was 2, she was friends with a dragonet named Aloe. But Aloe was taken away from the palace after her mother, a member of an organization known as Society Against Monarchy, was captured. Gila befriended Yucca, King, and Salamander, and they got matching Rattlesnake tattoos. They would bully the other dragonets in the wingery.
One day, when she was 7, something inside Gila snapped and she attacked Yucca, who was a leader, eventually killing him. She was taken in by Queen Haze as her bodyguard and was trained. One seemingly normal day, Queen Haze asked her to bring up the prisoner from the dungeons. She obliged and found out that the prisoner was Aloe, who had joined the S.A.M.
Together, they escaped, bringing Ocotillo and her boyfriend Wildcat with them. Aloe went back to the S.A.M. headquarters while Gila, Ocotillo, and Wildcat were approached by a cloaked Seawing, who was Atlantic. She offered them a place in Lost, which was in our world. A raven transported them there and they were turned into scavengers. Gila took on the name Gianna, Ocotillo used Olive and Wildcat became Axle.
They entered the city of Lost and met Stargazer. He was the leader of the town since he created it. He was visited by an Allwing god, who gave him the task of creating the city. He took it in exchange for his sister being turned into a different dragon, Luna and being sent to join the Revenge, a group that fought criminals. Ironically, Lost was filled mostly with criminals that needed to escape and were in scavenger form.
So while they stayed, Gila developed feelings for Stargazer and they went on a few dates in secret. After a few weeks, Gila stayed in Lost but Wildcat and Ocotillo go back to the dragon world and live in a town called Hope. Gila and Stargazer had Summer and Atlantic, her scavenger name being Alana, had a dragnet named Pacific, or Penny, with a Sandwing named Reptile, or Rowan. Rowan left the city, stealing Atlantic's teleporting bird, which came from the gods and left to find the revenge to get forgiveness from Queen Haze. Pacific created a group with the dragon/scavengers her age to fight dragons like her father. A year or so later, Summer gets kidnapped. Pacific and Permafrost found her before anything serious happened. They knocked out the kidnapper and got Summer to safety.
After an adult interrogated the kidnapper, they found out the Revenge had been informed by Reptile about the city and were give the bird that teleported and transformed dragons. But the city was protected by a god spell which only Atlantic could make exceptions from. The kidnapper was trying to find out how to get into the city. Summer decided to leave and she used the backup dagger to get to the dragon world.
She found Gila and Wildcat who heard her story and went back to the scavenger world with her, though she tried to refuse. When she came back, everyone in the midst of battle. The revenge had found its way into the city. Gila was confronted by Salamander who used to have a romantic connection with Yucca and was seeking revenge. She had joined the Revenge for that purpose. Gila killed her off and eventually the citizens of Lost won the battle.
Wildcat was killed by protecting Ocotillo from an attacker. Stargazer met up with his sister who helped them win the battle by backstabbing the Revenge. She chose to live in Lost and took on the name Sam after the organization their mother was apart of and died for. Pacific starts a relationship with Permafrost.

That's...a bit of a weird backstory. Now while I don't get the whole point of a dragon-to-scavenger city, since dragons alway saw scavengers as pets or prey, but it's a cool concept.
Honestly, I don't have anything to say for this one. There's a lot of details, and the only question I have is why did she kill Yucca in the first place. Also, why would the dragons take human names?

Overall, I give Gila/Gianna a 6.5/10. Work majorly on her personality, and a bit on her appearance.