OC belongs to @LaurenABlack
Name: Air
An okay name. Not the best, not the worse.
Age: 4
Okay.
Gender: Female
Cool.
Sexuality: straight
Nice.
Tribe: Skywing/Mudwing hybrid
Don't see many of these hybrids around. I like it!
Looks: she is a maroon dragon with a warm brown curling in on the edges of her wings and there is some amber coloring on her underbelly
She sounds pretty. The only this is you might want to add her eye colour, body shape, height, etc, etc.
Personality: she is shy but friendly. She is nice and protective of those she cares about and she isn't afraid to fight or defend her family and friends.
Add some more flaws to even it out.
Backstory: she grew up with no one but her family around so she doesn't really know how to act around other dragons but other then that she had a peaceful childhood.
Did anything else happen? Also, if her father is Clay, did he just cut off contacts with Tsunami, Glory and all them?
Residence: currently living in a cave on the border between the Skywing and Mudwing kingdoms.
Like it, balances her parents out.
Relatives: her parents are Clay and Peril and she has a younger brother named Squelch.
Nice. Squelch is a cute name. Only thing again that I mentioned in backstories, did Clay just cut of contacts, since it mentioned she didn't grow up with anyone other then her family.
Friends: she is friends with the other Dragonets of Destiny's children, such as Tsunami's dragonets, Kelp and Seashell, and Glory's dragonets, Darkcolor and Joy. She is also friends with Moonwatcher, Qibli, and Winter but out of all of them, Joy and Moon are her best friends.
Cute. Joy's a nice name.
Crush: she has a crush on a Nightwing named Nightflyer and he likes her back.
Aw
Abilities: she can fly in almost any weather and can breath fire hotter than any other dragon. She also has fireproof scales.
A nice balance with the abilities. Not too over-powered.
Hobbies: she is an artist, an amazing sculpturer and she loves making little statues of the dragons she meets.
Cool hobby.
Overall, I give Air a 6/10. Her major flaw is just she doesn't seem developed enough! Just work on the personality, looks and backstory a bit.
A/N. Sorry I haven't update in awhile! One excuse. School. And sickness. So two. I'm gonna try and update soon and rate all these OCs people keep commenting!
Side Note, thanks for all the OCs!
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