OC belongs to @Sunset_the_Hybrid
Name: Torrent
I've never seen this one before, it's good. It fits with his tribe and its original.
Gender: Male
Okay:3
Tribe: SeaWing
A very overused tribe, but I'll let it slide
Age: 6
So he's still a dragonet, okay.
Sexuality: straight
Alright
Queen he supports: Coral
Makes sense
Personality: mellow, nice, if someone is hurt he is the first one there.
Very vague. Add more traits, good and bad.
Looks: sapphire blue scales with light pink and magenta under scales and a sea green under belly. He has emerald green eyes and the SeaWing royal pattern on the undersides of his wings.
Maybe add more, like body shape, weight, height, etc. Also, I assume he's Royal?
Accessories: nothing
Okay then
Backstory: nothing special
Uh, that's not really a backstory?
Other: he's an animus, but he doesn't know
Again, I assume he's Royal?
I give Torrent a 5/10, his name is good. However, everything else about him is really vague. He's definitely a WIP. You really need to work on him (unless he's only a character that appears a few times, but you still need to work on him.)
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