( FINISHED ) Wings of Fire OC Rating

Wave

OC belongs wavestar123

Name:Wave

Unique name,good for a Seawing. I also have an OC named Wave wow

Age:20

Another adult

Gender:Female

Female again

Sexuality:Bi

Our first Bi!

Tribe:Sea/Sand/RainWing hybrid (that probably seems like a lot, but it's explained in her backstory)

Our first hybrid,she is kinda a weird hybrid

Queen she supports:Queen Glory

Alright,a lot of dragon support Queen Glory

Looks:She can turn any normal SeaWing colour, she also has gills, and has RainWing fangs, she also has a Sand wing barb, but it's venom can only temporarily paralyse it's victim, her claws are an odd blue colour, and she can't change them, but she loves them, because they're exactly the same as her mother's claws, her wings are actually animus enchanted, she was born without wings, but the SkyWings had an animus enchant new ones for her

You might want to take out the part about how she can't change her claws,because Who would want to change their claws if their blue? Blues a pretty colour

Attires:A necklace with a purple stone on it, it's not magic, but her sister gave it to her, so she always wears it

Sounds very pretty,and I like it was given about her sister

Personality:Jumpy, nervous, gets really nasty when dragons ask about her past or threaten her family

Maybe add a few more good traits and maybe one more flaw,to balance it out

Backstory:She was part of an experiment set up by Queen Scarlet to make a hybrid army for Burn, all of which were meant to fight and then be killed and put on display in Burn's fort, Wave was one of the main subjects, as she had three different tribes in her, and was meant to be bred with one of the rare SkyWing hybrids, Eagle, but because of this, her parents decided to start a rebellion. They lead the strongest of the hybrids to break out, and they managed to break a way out, but that shook the mountains, and alerted the SkyWings, who came down and fought, the hybrids won, forcing the SkyWings to retreat, but Wave's parents were killed, leaving her to care for her younger sister, Papaya, on her own, the hybrids took refuge in the forest, not far from where the Prophecy Dragonets were raised. It was there that she actually met Eagle, who turned out to hate the SkyWings just as much as she did, because they had killed his mother for refusing to let them take his egg from her, the pair grew closer, and eventually became mates. They currently live in one of the hybrids dens with Papaya (Wave's sister), and their adopted daughter Starreader, a NightWing dragonet they found abandoned by the rain forest

Alright,I'm pretty sure Eagle is a canon name but whatever. It might be Hawk I'm think of. Pretty unique backstory

Occupation:She helps the other hybrids around 'camp', which is really a bunch of dens that the hybrids with the strongest claws dug for them

Like the detail about the camp

Residence:The hybrid 'camp' near where the Prophecy Dragonets were raised

Don't really have much to say about this

Parents and Siblings:Oasis (mother, Rain/SandWing hybrid, dead), Hammerhead (father, SeaWing, dead), Foam (half sister, Rain/Sand/NightWing, dead), Papaya (Younger sister, Sea/Sand/RainWing)

Oasis is already a canon name,but I use her sister's name as a insult,LOL. But other then that pretty names

Mate:Eagle

Again,might be a canon name,or I'm just probably getting if mixed up with Hawk,eh

Adopted Daughter:Starreader

K then

Friends:Sulphur (Mud/NightWing), Beach (Sand/SeaWing)

Alright,don't have much to say expect HYBRIDS

Abilities:Can breathe underwater, temporarily paralyse dragons with her tail venom, shoot venom from her fangs, and change to normal SeaWing colours

I don't get the paralyze part,so far I don't know any tribes that can do that? So I don't get why she can

Powers:None

K

Hobbies:She loves reading scrolls whenever she gets a chance, she also loves to make necklaces with Papaya, and play games with Starreader

Loves to read scrolls is very overused,but the make neckless thing is cool

Other:She had a whole den dug out to make remembrance shrines for the dragons who died the day they escaped the mountains, she designed one for each of her parents and one for her half sister Foam

Sweet

Quote: "The thing about life is that, if something doesn't kill you, it's either useless, or on your side"

Our first quote! I like it

Overall,I'll give Wave a 6/10,she's a hybrid,witch is incredibly overused,and her personality could use work. I don't get how she supports Queen Glory if she's all the way up by the Sky Kingdom. However,her backstory is unique