OC belongs to @Wormieworm
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Name: Hellfire
Hmm, Hellfire is a bit of an odd name. I've seen Wildfire, but never Hellfire. Do dragons even know what Hell is?
Age: dragon years are evil, so like 28 in human years
Dragon years are evil
Gender: Male
Okay
Sexuality: Straight
Okay
Tribe: SkyWing
Coolio
Queen: (HE HAS TWO HA) Cliff (is a king) Glory(queen duh)
Cool. Hope to hear more about this
Looks: @Kylie423 's art book. The chapter on Hellfire and Eclipse
[Ummmm. I can't use the picture at the moment soooooo]
Attire: none
Okay
Personality: Hyper, funny, gullible, childish, kind, confident
Add more flaws.
Backstory: Hellfire hatched in SkyWing territory, and lived in the castle with his mother and father(both guards of Queen Ruby) In that time, he became close friends with Prince Cliff and attended JMA with him. After leaving Jade Mountain, he became a royal guard. Hellfire left the kingdom to explore, and met his mate in the rainforest. Her name was Eclipse, and she soon had two tribrid dragonets, her being a Rain/Night. Hellfire now lives in the rainforest, occasionally going to the SkyWing kingdom to stay with now King Cliff.
Good backstory. A bit risky having Hellfire interacting for canon characters, but you made it work well.
Residence: Rainforest
Makes sense
Relatives: Eclipse(Mate) Starfruit (Dragonet) Olympian(Dragonet)Volcano(Mother) Citrine(Father)
Nice names
Friends: Cliff, Eclipse, Both his dragonets, most SkyWings, most RainWings
Okay. Lot of friends
Crush: Eclipse
Makes sense
Mate: Eclipse
Makes sense
Dragonets: Olympian and Starfruit
Nice name
Abilities: Normal abilities
Okay
Powers: None
Okay
Hobbies: not any really XD
Um okay
Other: N/A
Cool
Quote: "I'm not gonna let you harm my queen!"
Okay
Occupation: Former Guard
Okay
Overall, I give Hellfire a 7/10. He's a good character, maybe work out a few kinks and you should be good.
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