( FINISHED ) Wings of Fire OC Rating

Abispa

OC belongs to _WarriorDragon_

[ Name ] Abispa
[ Name Meaning ] Named after her scale colours and markings

Nice! I do hate wasps lmao.

[ Biological Gender ] Female/Dragoness
[ Preferred Gender ] Female/Dragoness
[ Pronouns ] Her, She

Cool

[ Born In ] Hornet Hive
[ Age ] 7 ( 16 in human years )

Alright

[ Tribe ] HiveWings
[ Rank ] Princess
[ Preferred Rank ] Princess

Okay

[ Sexuality ] Bisexual

Nice

[ Father's Name ] Unknown Hivewing
[ Mother's Name ] Lady Hornet
[ Crush(s) ] FireFly
[ Mate(s) ] None
[ Dragonets/Eggs ] None as of now

Okay names, but why's the the second 'F' in Firefly capitalized??

[ Markings ] Black rings of scales on tail, black wing tips
[ Scars ] none
[ Eye Color ] Emerald Green
[ Disabilities ] None
[ Appearance ] Abispa is quite a stunning dragon, she has glowing emerald green eyes that shimmer almost as much as the moons themselves. Her body is mainly a mix of sparkling reds, shimmering oranges and glowing yellows, she has a few gold scales dotted around her body. She has rings of black scales on her tail, black tipped wings and splotches of black scales splashed on certain spots on her neck. Her underbelly plates are a pastel yellow that shimmer in the sunlight. Abispa has long sleek reddish- black horns that slightly curve at the end, she has short black spines that trail down from her head to her tail tip. Abispa's body is long and elegant, though she isn't very tall, she's not very short either (kind of just in the middle). Her wings are long and narrow, her membranes are mainly clear with hints of semitransparent pastel greens and blues.

[ Other ] Abispa often wears jewellery but one thing she never takes off is a horn ring that her best friend gave to her before she moved hives. She also often wears hoop earrings

Wow, okay. This is really good! Like the jewellery bit, good job!

[ Personality ]
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[ Positive Traits ] Natural Leader - As a young child Abispa was taught by her mother, Lady Hornet, to be the next leader of Hornet Hive. She is a strong and persuasive dragon who is comfortable with being in charge of her peers
Buoyant - Though Abispa is usually calm and composed, sometimes she likes to just hang around and have fun and be happy like any other dragonet her age, she doesn't get those chances very often which is why she tries to make the most of them
Problem Solver - Abispa would often spend her free time, (which she had a lot of) solving any riddles she could find. Her mother would never have time for her which gave her a lot of time to figure out the answers to her riddles and questions.

[ Neutral Traits ] Level Headed- As a princess Abispa has always known how to keep her composure and be tranquil. Though this lets her stay calm in stressful situations, it stops her from showing her truel emotions sometimes.
Curious - When she was young she would always want to know what her mother was doing whenever she was taking care of "Hive business", this eventually evolved into her always being curious about most things anybody did.

[ Negative Traits ] Perfectionist - At times Abispa can see her way as the only way of doing things, similar to her mother in a way, if things are not done her way then to her it is a problem that must be fixed.
Insecure - Abispa's relationship with her mother was always bitter and weak, her mother would never speak to her and soon she was sent away to Vinegaroon Hive because her mother couldn't handle her, this caused her to feel abandoned and like she couldn't trust anyone. It also made her question if she was good enough, and if her mother would ever truly love her.
Apathetic - Abispa was always taught to hide her true emotions so others would see her as calm and composed, this did make her calm but also very apathetic. She has trouble showing her true emotions and hates opening up to others

[ Other ] Some say that Abispa is two-faced because half of her is calm and composed and the other half is buoyant and joyful. Abispa has an intense fear of being bound or tied up.

This is also incredibly detailed! I have nothing to say other than good job once again, lol.

[ Strengths ] Her only natural weapon is a deadly stinger in her tail, it inflicts a sort of "shock" into their target that can stun them for up to a few hours. She is immune to Queen Wasp's mind control because she is the daughter of Lady Hornet.

HiveWings are interesting because everyone has a different ability, so congrats for not making her overpowered.

[ Occupation ] Abispa is the daughter of Lady Hornet making her a princess, she was raised among the noble hive wings in Hornet Hive but when she was 5 she was sent away to Vinegaroon Hive to live with her aunt.

Alright.

[ Residence ] Abispa was hatched and raised in Hornet hive before her mother sent her away to Vinegaroon Hive. She lives in her aunt's palace in Vinegaroon Hive and occasionally visits her mother and best friend in Hornet Hive.

Why, though? (Hopefully it gets answered in the backstory?)

[ Family Information ] Abispa never knew her father but her mother is Lady Hornet, a muscular golden-yellow hive wing with multiple black rings along her tail. Her relationship with her mother was always bitter as her mother would never be able to spend time with her. Abispa would always bug her mother with questions and tell her about the things she learned at school until Lady Hornet got fed up with her questions and sent her to live with Lady Vinegaroon. This broke Abispa's heart as all she had wanted was her mother's approval and now she knew that she might never get it.

Oh that's why. Poor baby.

[ Fan fiction ] I might write a fanfiction about Abispa but no promises are made because i haven't written anything before

Take your time! : )

[ Backstory ] Growing up Abispa always felt isolated from her family, other dragonets and even her best friend, Firefly. Her mother seemed to somehow control her life and yet never be a part of it, Lady Hornet would almost always be dealing with her "hive business" and never have any time to spend with Abispa, so she would spend all her free time (which seemed to be almost her whole day), doing things like riddles and spending time with Firefly.

Due to being isolated from the rest of her tribe, Abispa became insecure and unsure of herself, she found herself only ever confiding in Firefly before after years of being shunned and unloved, her mother finally had enough of her daughter's endless, annoying questions and sent her to Abispa's aunts hive, Vinegaroon Hive.

Lady Vinegaroon was a lot kinder and accepting that Lady Hornet had been and after Abispa arrived she was immediately put into a new school, a new environment and a whole new life. It was so strange and unfamiliar to her, she didn't know anybody and she longed to be home with firefly, the only dragon she truly cared about.

To Abispa's surprise she actually managed to make a friend, though, she knew Lady Vinegaroon and her mother would never approve of this friend. His name was Assam. Assum, a pale yellow silk wing with a greyish blue over coat and blue wings. Assum was the only dragon Abispa felt she could trust, after a while of them being friends, Abispa finally began to show him the more happy side to her, instead of the composed mask she wore around all the others.

Slowly Abispa began to adapt to her new life until one of her visits to Hornet Hive was flipped upside down. One of Queen Wasp's "whole hive command" had been started, but it was stranger than the others somehow. All the dragons in Hornet hive (except for the royal family) rose from their homes and flew off across the savannah in the direction of Bloodworm Hive, Abispa was sad and angry that her time with Firefly had been interrupted but soon those feelings turned into fear as she heard the news. It felt as though a large, cold stone had dropped into her stomach and held her, making her bound to the floor. Bloodworm hive was burning to the ground, and Queen Wasp had sent Firefly straight into the middle of the blaze.

Rip to Firefly. Once again, very descriptive. I don't have anything for you to improve on!

Overall, I give Abispa a 10/10. I have no complaints! : )