OC belongs to @Dragondoodle
Name: Tea
Odd name for a dragon, do dragons even drink tea? Anyway it's cute.
Age: 12
Okay
Gender: Female
Lots of female OCs
Sexuality: Straight
K then
Supported Queen: None
So, is she a loner?
Tribe: Seawing
Seawings are overused a lot, but I won't take off points for that.
Looks: darker cyan (main), Dark blue (crest), Teal blue (patterns), Pale blue (eyes).
Add her body shape, weight, height, etc etc. Looks are not just scale colours.
Personality: Shy, anti- social, don't touch her fricken tea or she'll try to hurt you.
I fricken love tea too, but anyway, this personality is overused and needs some work. Add some more strengths, and a few more flaws.
Accessories: Teabag earring, neck pouch (like they have at Jade Mountain)
Teabag earring? Do they even make those? She probably made it herself but still.
Backstory: You found out her power at a young age by grabbing some driftwood,
And turning it into a cup of tea. Otherwise pretty normal. She occasionally visits
MountainWing (made up species) isle.
Very vague, also who just grabs a piece of driftwood and make it tea? That's a like werid. You need to work on her backstory more.
Friends: ColorFang, a friendly CamoWing (My friend made him and the species up)
Hibiscus, outgoing Rainwing princess with a sloth named bloob (other friend made her up)
Rainwing Princess? Is this is the canon book times or--?
Powers: Animus
So, is she Royal? And again, dose this take place in the canon book times or sometime else?
I give Tea a 5/10. She needs work on her personality and backstory, and her looks could sue a bit of work (Personality and backstory are the main things, thought). Her name is also werid. Tea is a WIP I think.
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