[ FINISHED - do not submit an oc, i will not do it ]
hi everyone. my names Jam (they / them) and this book is finished. its done. im not rating ocs anymore, thank god, so do not submit an oc or i will delete it. im serious. if youre curious about it...
Appearance: He is a small red-orange dragon with a tan underbelly. His spine scales are dark red as well as his spikes, and his horns are pale white. The insides of his wings are bright orange, and the outsides are red. He has bright green eyes.
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(Art by OC creator, @AnimalsRock7 on Wattpad in their book "Wings of Fire Drawings", Chapter Four - "Skyfire the SkyWing". Link -> https://my.w.tt/s4J4pCaie5)
Add more details, like his weight, body shape, etc, etc.
Personality: Friendly, caring, cunning/clever, lazy, impulsive, too trusting, sense of humor, slight liar, selfless, likes to impress others.
This needs a few more details. Add a few more flaws to balance everything out.
Occupation: I don't know yet
Kk.
Residence: Lives in the SkyWing kingdom
Nice.
Relatives: Rubyflight (Mother, SkyWing) Phoenix (Father, SkyWing) and Dawn (Sister, SkyWing)
Rubyflight is a bit odd seeing there's already a 'Ruby' hanging about, but I like the other two.
Friends/Crush: Still developing, but he cares for a SeaWing called Reef
Cute.
Backstory: Skyfire grew up in SkyWing territory, with his parents and sister. Has a pretty normal life, I'm mainly still developing his backstory though, if you have any feedback for this it would be appreciated
I can't really give much feedback rn, seeing there's not much, but you have a good start. In all honesty his backstory depends on whatever you want to do with him — if you're using him for an RP, just develop his childhood a bit more, if you're using him for a fic try and figure out a plot to the fic then work him in, etc, etc
Overall, I give Skyfire a 5.5/10. It was hard to rate without the backstory, so really just work on that and a little bit on the personally and appearance.
