OC belongs to @Meowseerfemale
Name: Azure
A bit overused, but pretty.
Age: 6
Okay.
Gender: female
Cool.
Sexuality: pansexual
Nice.
Tribe: slikwing seawing
First time I've seen this pairing before, so cool.
Appearance: Azure has four blue wings, her under wings are turquoise, her underbelly is also turquoise, and she has dark blue eyes.
Add way more detail, like her bodyshape, height, claw/horn colour, etc. Since she's a hybrid, her bodyshape is really important (she has attributes of a SilkWing, but what SeaWing features does she have?)
Personality: snazzy and yet kind and nice
Once again, add more detail. You need more positive and negative traits.
Residence: jade montain academy
Alright.
Relatives:
Queen flame
King ocean
These are ... very basic names.
Freinds: icy (icewing) and tropic (rainwing)
Once again, kinda of bland names.
Backstory: she was left by her real parents and the king and queen of the seawings adopted her since there were no female dragonets to take the throne so she was raised by them to show that shes strong and fierce
Okay, add LOTS more detail. What was it like growing up a royal hybrid? How did she meet her friends? When did she go to Jade Mountain?
(Also, I'm assuming the parents listed are her adoptive ones, so ... whys the SeaWing queen named Flame?)
Abilitys: animus,flameslik, and can breath underwater
Wait, where did she get the animus gene? I thought she was adopted.
Other: she has alot of brothers!
Alright, but next time that goes into the 'relatives' category.
I give Azure a 2/10. You need tons more work on her appearance, personality, backstory, and you also might want to change a few names and wrap up a few plot holes.
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