[ FINISHED - do not submit an oc, i will not do it ]
hi everyone. my names Jam (they / them) and this book is finished. its done. im not rating ocs anymore, thank god, so do not submit an oc or i will delete it. im serious. if youre curious about it...
Not the most creative name, I've seen it before, but it's okay I guess
Age: 12
Nice
Gender: Male
Cool
Sexuality: straight
Okay
Tribe: Icewings
Icewings are not overused or underused, so, okay :3
Queen: Uknown....."character takes place after tenth book" and queen glacier dies in book 9
Good job at including Book Nine
Looks: check my art book I suck at describing
Um, okay?
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(I went into your art book, this was all I could find, so, uh, ya)
Attire: none
Okay
Personality: Fearless, Helpful, funny, strong, always makes someone laugh, will do anything to save someone even if it kills him
Hmm, add more flaws, and one more good trait. Also, does his backstory affect him in anyway?
Backstory: mother and father died at birth because of the Sandwing war..... When he was 5 he became a assassin and made lots of gold...... Became part of the IceWing army when he was 8.... Now still in the army trying to find a way to defeat darkstarker with help from a unexpected source
Mother and father dead is overused. Also very bland so far. Add some details please, how was it like growing up and stuff.
Residence: IceWing palace
Okay makes sense
Relatives: none
Well, he does have his mother and father.
Friends: none
Alright
Crush: DesertBloom (@Dragonlover0234 character in my book)
Is she a Sandwing? Icewing? Guard? Why wasn't she mentioned in backstory?
Mate: none Dragonets: none
Makes sense
Abilities normal IceWing powers
Okay
Powers: can sense danger
Why wasn't this mentioned, like was he trained to do this?
Hobbies: reading, hunting, flying, helping out, sometimes making stuff like swords and armour
Okay
Other: eeeehhhhhh
Okay
Quote: "Hey listen I rather get my tail chopped of then do what you want"
Actually, this does seem like something a dragon would say
Occupation: Army
Yep
I give Snowstorm a 6/10. Work on Snowstorms personality and backstory (and work on describing).
