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《Blue》Hear the Whispers Sing

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Reviewer : oOPrincessBlueOo
Written by : shoutouttodiversity

Title :
The title is really nice, and it suits the story pretty well.

Cover :
I like it! It's pretty good, and it suits the story! However, I think that you should make the author's name a bit larger.

Description :
It's really descriptive, and it's perfect! Good job!

Plots :
I love how you've started the story with a poem! The poem made me eager to read the other chapters of the book, and it has a really nice and a huge meaning! Also, the plots are well written!

Characters :
You've portrayed the characters well! And their expressions and feelings are well expressed!

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation :
I didn't find any mistakes! Everything's perfect!

Engagement :
I really enjoyed reading your story! It's really interesting! It was a bit confusing at first, but it's good! I learnt a bit about the Swahili culture by reading your book! Also, I love how you've added a glossary section at the end of each chapter! They made it easier for me to understand the story since I didn't know the meaning of those words. Keep up the good work!